Meh novel. The economy and game element makes no sense. Just killing a few locusts and boars at the start already made him earn more than 300 usd.
overall, not a very bad novel the stories are very interesting though it has few grammar mistakes, the novel is quite promising yet underrated, keep it up!
All around maybe the best ero type novel I've ever read. My only problem with it is that there aren't enough chapters, so as one of the other reveiws so eloquently repeated, don't drop.
so far as of chapter 2 this is a great story can't what to see more.............................................................................................................................
The story is awesome. Characters are somewhat real and relating at some places. Quite slow moving but ya reading is enjoyable. Good job author. Waiting for updates.
Reading the first 5 chapters, I want to point out something. Jake Lin, a defected human who can't use his right hand but is a genius at mathematic. It seem like everything was normal as he got home to see his older sister, playing that popular game and possibly became a professional gamer. Then it all went spiral and out of control when she decided to use some code which caused a huge disaster and Jake Lin became unconscious, only to wake up with a "system". So far, this storyline is intriguing and kept me interested but one flaw thing about this novel is the formatting. It got a little bit difficult to understand when the conversation is jumbled up in one paragraph. I suggest the author to separate the paragraph into 1-2 sentences for us reader to read it clearly and not get confused. I wished to say more but so far with only 5 chapters out, I can only wait for more to see the development and how Jake Lin will utilize his system to benefit him such as, getting rid of the handicapped status.
So far so good, I like the execution of the novel. The MC is a likeable act according to reason.
I like how it did not follow the usual cliche that I was expecting when he met with the colleague in the tutorial, it seems that we of them have a good view toward him even if the MC thought otherwise.
I hope his brothers will not be neglected in terms of importance and development.
don't expect anything to accurate in America perception just think of it as a foreign country. that isn't the major problem though they added a cost with reward system in the form of choices but somehow completely making the person think completely differently is the cheapest choice. maybe I'll change my thoughts if there comes a time where the mc wants to be hated by someone and couldn't because it's too expensive but until then.
Till Chapter 20
thank you for wasting my time.
Tipp for everyone else: dont waste your time here and move on. There is really nothing to gane from this one.
looking forward to this one.
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I gave it a 4.4 because...
I'm too tired and i have school so goodnight....
I'm very sleep deprived