It's just a bad piece of literature (if one can call it that). The grammar, the tenses, and the sentence structure is bad and needs revising. The objectification of women is bad and a dumb choice.
The logic behind the system and the different things in the world is flawed and inconsistent. E.g guns made pre-WW2 era works but any post-WW2 gun does, somehow, not work. (+The systems guns work?) The principle behind them is pretty much the same for the two sides.
The units of measurement is not well planned.
In other words, I do not recommend you read this novel if you don't want to lose brain cells.
Another story that based on hollywood which the MC is just copying the best seller movie and direct it himself.
I quite like this one cuz novel that has a bit of 'hollywood' thingy is very scarce, as for the sex and stuff inside that mainly hollywood novel do i wont elaborate.
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Fantastic read. Writing quality can be improved further but other than that, plot is good. Reminds me of a video game story. Looking forward for more development of the story.
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Expecting to be dropped. Story is good, since this genre is his forte. But let me remind you, dont invest too much. Save your coin or fast pass, wait till 500 chptr. Stockpiling first, since my heart still felt hurt when you decided to drop other novel. I know dont judge a person by his pass mistake. But you know, he can do it before, so it mean he can do it again. Good luck and please finish what you have started.
In the first chapter or so, there is a slight turn off with MC propaganda. I stuck it out until chapter 10 and discovered that the story picks up. However, our MC is slightly crazy and is a supposed genius. I feel that lowered character development, but the story in itself is interesting with a player system but with the players being akin to the supernatural. It's a pretty good read, but with some face palming moments.
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Does anyone know its chinese name? Or a site where you can read it mtl? I can’t find it so I would really appreciate it if you could help Thanks