So um, I don't know if I wanna walk any further into the novel. Since I don't wanna be immersed than suddenly get hit by yaoi romance. I'm no homophobe. But its just not my preference.
Not bad but the reduced lifespan thing bums me out… what’s th point in observing a mayfly… im sure it’l be fixed by plot armour so whatever
One of my favorite reading on that platform.
The story is quite original, I didn't thought it would be taking that direction.
The writing quality is almost perfect, the only star I dropped (would have liked put 4.5/5) due to some little mistake but they are rare.
The only thing I regret is discovering that novel right before the exam of the author. The wait will seem so long ^^
So good luck, I pray for you.
This new version much better than the old one, Chen Li didn't become as heartless as before, and that's a good change.
even if u start changing the story at chapter 100 there is still 100 chapters that completely copied from the original no one is gonna w8 for u to copy and paste 100 chapters till u decide to change the story
chapter one
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The worst grammar that I ever saw on qindian, the story is not bad but it is all to easy and a little boring because of it. If you don't add any interesting action it is not worth it
Ok so, I've been binge-reading this and I think that there's very little room for improvement with this story. the only problems I've seen are spelling and grammar. I'm excited to see where this story will go in the future. Keep up the great work!
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Book seemed to be rushed. Could have more development and more elaborate ending. A great concept with some work would be an amazing read
I am only in the first chapter but I will still review it.
So, the story thus far is interesting as the plot progresses as your storytelling gets people intrigued, but the grammar breaks the moments, unquestionably focus on your writing as it may cause the readers to lose interest quite fast.
Tip - there is something called 'showing, not telling', you don't tell your readers, you 'show' them.
Example, you don't write, "He is angry," you 'show' them, by "He gritted his teeth," the readers will 'feel' the emotions of the characters by reading through, just saying "he is angry," doesn't excite anyone, but a pretty good novel.
Pretty short for my normal reviews.
Be optimistic, that's what a Novelist strive for.
The author completely forgot about the first pet .................................................................................................................................................
I am not into game novels , but this once is catchy from the start .The detailed description about the ML and his two friends are interesting and make me immerse in the story also the plot that will unfold seems intrigue. I am going to read it whole ! So far is a good novel , with a great writing style, simple and efficient, also has great vocabulary . Keep up the good work !