Great read with great potential to be a good story, looking forward to more chapters from the author and I hope they keep it up.
Amazing story. Author u can do well. Go ahead. Your story concept is very nice. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
The writing quality towards the beginning is choppy, however it gets much better towards the current chapters. It has Steered clear of most stereotypes, and is a very enjoyable read.
The writing quality drops drastically as the story continues. The worst part is probably the storytelling voice or the writing style shifts in a poor direction. Instead of using descriptions to tell the story, it shifts to a bad narration. The author starts telling you how you should feel rather than using their writing to allow you to arrive at the conclusion they are looking for. It’s a very lazy writing style in my opinion.
The side characters become less and less relevant as the story progresses and their development nearly stops entirely. The worst part is the author continues to jam them in your face. This makes the story a boring slog of irrelevance that you continue to read only due to sunk cost, having paid for earlier chapters.
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The beginning is a bit slow, but soon picks up. The cover of this novel I feel does not do this book justice, but lets ignore that for a second. This book is incredibly well written and has an interesting development style in the book. While the main character is focused upon greatly, he is merely serving as a binding for the story arcs that occur between each character while simultaneously being influenced by each side character that he is introduced to. The author introduces several side characters slowly, with an incredibly heartwarming yet humorous story arc, as the novel progresses to always keep it interesting. Well worth the read, and i reccomend at least to give it a try.
Good work author. The book is quit detailing and religious and good timing. But I was just getting into the book...like I typed, good story line. I loved that she did not just bagged the job thing very real life-y. Tumbs up author.
Personally I liked this novel, it is easy to read, when u want to relax and read about an MC with a powerful abIlity this is a good novel. The characters are a bit shallow in my opinion, but at the same time it lessens the pressure from reading. This Novel is all about ur personal mood at the moment
Drop this novel now, so someone else can translate it, i have waited for about 6 months now.
If you think like me than like this so someone can see it. Good evening everyone from Italy
The idea is good, but it has critical flaws:
To begin :
-in this perfect world there is no industrial espionage, a company can maintain a research monopoly for decades without the government or another company having knowledge.
-Even having knowledge of technology, the government does not move to acquire or apply pressure, even though it would have popular support.
-In that world contracts are perfect and can even annul human rights or law. These are just a few of the points.
This reads like a mid-2010s **** cable tv show, and it's glorious.
There's a certain feel in your story. Like your characters are really living their lives in the moment. It's a sense of wierd nostalgia that I cant put my finger on. It's good, is what I'm trying to say.
Very wholesome. Keep on writing
It is definitely a notch above the stories |
have read here till now.
I picked this up because it had some
appealing tags & nice reviews, but gosh, the harem stuff is very overbearing.
Wouldn't mind being introduced to some male friend of Jason's and having some sort of normal or serious conversation, instead of him being surrounded by gals every chapter. You know, might flesh him out beyond the Casanova that he is.
As of chapter 8, the plot has progressed
rather slowly – with only one tease of the
significant samsara aspect. This progression is mostly drowned in the banter & frills the male lead indulges with his harem group.
Will continue reading since it's somewhat
entertaining to read.