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petition to bring back the world of deities.........................................................................................................................
I really Like the plot and but can you make him a little bit more like issei in wish of the dragons character just a tiny bit then it would be perfect but development first (aloof character)
Hello, Author here. I just wanted to say that I voted for my self by mistake[img=faceslap] while trying to see what these buttons do.
i put 5 stars there because it didn't want to save my review without giving some stars haha
i hope you like the novel and i really hope you tell me if you like it.
thanks
STRONGEST ON THE ENTIRE SIGHT! I take offence to that. Anyway it seems like something I would read so here is 5 stats for making me laugh…….
Keywords: System; OP-Protagonist; Power FantasyLu Li (the protagonist) is reincarnated into a cultivation world, he finds himself in a devil sect and must show progress in the devil sects devil techniques otherwise he'll be killed.As the protagonist does not want to cultivate devil techniques he visits the devil sects repository and obtains Buddhist techniques.Lu Li ends up cultivating both devil and Buddhist techniques simultaneously and steels himself to become more ruthless to survive in the devil sect.He later kills a fellow disciple that attacked him.The best aspect of the novel so far is the Disco Elysium inspired cultivation techniques that bicker, though so far the devil techniques just hate the Buddhist techniques and vice versa.The techniques do not comment on anything other than cultivation so far, so you won't get a devil technique urging him to kill someone while a Buddhist technique tells him otherwise.TL;DRBetter than most on trial read at this time, has a few typo's, overall meh.
This was so sweet! My heart melted at many moments and Ayesha's enigmatic yet genuinely nice personality is a perfect example of commendable character writing. Marco's reactions to certain situations was highly relatable and realistic, making the reader feel connected to the MC, ultimately creating an enjoyable story. Obviously, the credit goes to the beautiful writing. The description was out of this world and the scene development was undeniably great; as a reader, I felt true fear, suspense and chills in many of the circumstances faced by the characters, and that goes to show just how good this was. Overall, I loved it ❤️Summed up in one word (jk, it's two words): HIGHLY PRAISE-WORTHY
This novel is of my taste and it's gone just like this sigh................................................................................
Was interested during the first few chapters...But then the forced nationalism started and it keeps getting worse.Does the author get paid for this kind of nonsense? It's ok if there's a bit nationalism when the situation calls for it. Now it's just irritating..
Ryan is a great young talented writer who won a wattpad watty 2020 awards. Lets hope he can also bring the same magic to webnovel reader trough this novel. good luck
Its a good read, but one thing keeps bugging me. The fact that he decided to go to the mortal world while with his insane awakened talent could have received the grooming of a top tier family of the higher worlds. Its the same as being born rich and then saying you want to become poor. He could have gotten the top tier resources of the higher world for free (because of his bloodline talent) but what does he do? Goes to the mortal world to fight for the scraps and bits of stuff that doesnt even hold a fraction of the value of the stuff he could have gotten from his family in the higher world. The author might have done it for the world building but there are other ways to do it. He could have received the resources of his family, but when he was on a journey, he was suprise attacked and fell to the mortal world involuntarily. He is forsaking top tier resources voluntarily. Although the going to the mortal world was a good move for world background, I must say that doing it voluntarily just makes the MC looks stupid. If he fell involuntarily, it would have been good and fine, but he fricking went there voluntarily. Even if he wants to go temper himself somewhere, he can do that anywhere else. He could challenge the geniuses of other famillies to temper himself or go on dangerous beast hunting journeys. Other than this irritating action, I would say the story is good.
The story idea is really good. Good back ground. the only thing i dont like is the super slow pace. Everything seems to drag for chapters. im all for building the story and world but I would rmhoy it way more if he bumped up the pace of the story
A masterpiece novel
