ForniciaYadrea
I ve finished reading all the posted chapters up to day and it's really good. the author tried to explain some of the plot armour and he did it while riding the line, not convincing and convincing at the same time. all in all a good and entertaining read
It was really Good!! Except the last chapters are like rushed. But it was fun reading!!
but that's the point, it doesn't make sense to say that the skin is jade if the skin is beautiful, just say it's beautiful and that's it, the thing is that sometimes they say the skin is translucent too, translucent bro, you can see the live muscles, like saying the skin looked soft and etc, you don't have to keep this boring jade skin thing all the time
And one more thing btw, they forgot about the Hidden Sec's revenge and Carter. So yeah, just putting it out there.
AAAAHHH ILLEGAL CLIFFHANGER
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plz add more of this masterpiece its really good
If you ask me its one of the best novel
Not because I am Indian , because it based on
Reality that what would’ve been done at that time
Mc is 10000% narcissist and doesn't care for favors.
He is arrogant and shameless. Now he got is super cheat, the character development is not looking good .
I am dropping this because of Mc not of world development or chiche.
Im actually happy with the non-system tag cause i think system stories are just lazy. i mean just think of any of the great system novels and just imagine them with a well fleshed out magic or cultivation system and not the ones with exp points or whatever they use
“Books are the quietest and most constant of friends; they are the most accessible and wisest of counselors, and the most patient of teachers.”
Honestly one of the best novels, if not the best on this app
You can stop reading now
The only way I know of to stop is if I have a good
