What else can I say, but this story is so scary. The second chapter was the scariest and I love it. I wish the author can write more of this. Good job, author ?
Hiya! Attached is a breakdown of my review: Writing Quality 4/5: Noticed a few grammar errors here and there, some that I commented on, some that I didn't. I think some (like the missing period) should be catchable after a few proofreads. Update Stability 5/5: Not much to comment on there. Honestly the length of the chapters are super impressive. Story Development 4/5: I think you're aware of the issue since I noticed you mentioning this in the author's comments. I think it might be because I don't really read ML novels that much, but the first few chaps made me feel a bit overwhelmed. Especially with all the names being tossed around, some parts took a few rereads for me to get a grasp on what was happening. Character Design 5/5: Seems super detailed so far!World Background 5/5: This category took my breath away! The first few paragraphs describing the world literally gave me chills ahahaha. Your descriptions are probably your greatest strength, so I would say try to couple that with the action and the info a bit more so that there's more of a balance. Overall super good moods you set! Like it definitely matched what I expected after seeing your cover lel
Wow, few novels pull you in like this, especially with a weighty subject like Death and what happens when we die. I'm excited to follow this one's existential exploration of the hereafter. Keep it up, author!
Aside from a few clunky sentences herre and there, there's really not much to say about quality. uwuThe first chapter is a delight to read, introducing the stakes and the worldbuilding in a very interesting way. And I love how the author was brave enough to write MC's daily life for two chaps before diving into the action. I feel that I see a lot of people just jumping into the action after a few introductory sentences.The introduction of a bunch of characters on ch 2 was a bit eh, but since each character took so little time to expose, it doesn't really bother too much.Aside from all that, excited to see where things go.
Nice plot with amazing characters . It's interesting even from the prologue. It's like Iam watching a movie and doesn't want to pause. Amazing book???. keep it up.