TD:LR: Hidden machine translated novel for double the price of original works.
While a tad dry read for the first 40 chapters with some weird plot holes and hypocrisy, at chapter 41 the editor stopped caring and the story becomes a mess. Not to mention it costs 2 passes for a single chapter. I spent those 2 passes just to verify what others have said and read the 40 chapters to make a fair review. If you're going to be a scammer with machine translated novels, be up front about it. Otherwise you get the 1-star review.
Review
This concept of a minion system is really fresh and the progression of this system isn't too fast or too slow. It's the perfect pace to be satisfying yet not overwhelming.
One of my favourite aspect of the novel so far are the vivid character backstories, instead of just having the character say their past, the author shows their past in a flashback which is really cool.
It is a really engaging novel and the grammar is basically perfect with hardly any errors.
If you're looking for something new to read this is it!
I was wondering why there is no more good VRMMORPG Novel ongoing. Moonlight sculptor is finish, waiting for a trad for taming master, so Overgeard is the only and real good one ongoing...
I just find 2 new VRMMORPG with a good potential, and this one is in this two.
I'm sure the author know the 3 novels above and i hope he can find an interessting original story.
For the moment we can say "it's really good but a little "déjà vu"" but it
It's just the beginning and it's better than most of the others VRMMORPG ongoing so give it a try and thank to the author for his work.
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Been a pleasure reading it, especially before AM I LEWD ENOUGH, I feel like the story was not completed before it was shut down! maybe so as to focus on the new light novel(AM I LEWD ENOUGH), who knows. Anyway it been fun AND succeeded to erect me! forgive me for saying that, but it needs some depth in order to do so to me, thus, it is a good one not going to lie
Triple cool
I'm really loving the flow
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Here’s a great story obviously written by a pragmatic and smart individual. Perfect delivery of lines that are borderline painful and hilarious at times. The punch comes unannounced.
It’s the right mix of sarcasm, laughter and a slap of reality in a fantasy realm with characters and schemes so believable I as a reader applaud it. Enjoyable and worthwhile read so far! I hope the quality will stay consistent, if not improve as the chapters go by.
Full 5*!
I read up to the latest chapter, ~280, and I can say for sure: one of the hidden gems of Webnovel.
Give it a try, it's worth the time.
little SPOILER:
Only the Torture chapters (multiple) were too much. Not very story important, and it could be explained in 1-2 chapters, too.
Little bit overboard, but still.
Story is well written, nice grammar, nice updates, interesting story, interesting world and well thought story twists.
Waiting for more.
This novel is terrible. For some reason I can't post my actual review here so I'll copy paste it below as a reply. Just know that the novel is terrible.
at first I liked it, I thought It was good to have some changes in the default settings of MCs being fearless and I thought I would see some character growth, but he stays with same personality, at least till chapter 56 I couldn't continue after that.
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if you don't like whimp idiotic (not always idiot) MC, then this book isn't for you.
cringe cringe cringe cringe cringe cringe cringe cringe cringe cringe cringe cringe cringe cringe cringe cringe cringe cringe cringe cringe cringe cringe cringe cringe cringe cringe cringe
Waiting for the world building to get further, everything else is good. Pretty interesting book, really keeps me entertained when bored. Recommend for casual readers.
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