Good job, you created an English version so that it can be enjoyed by readers around the world. I hope they enjoy your story as much as I enjoy reading every novel you create
OK seriously what with all these synopsis.
... Ding, you've taken a step, you've aquared god's speed ...
... Ding, you've open your mouth, you've acquired all-speak ...
... Ding, you ate an ordinary apple, you've acquired immortal body ...
Best thing I've read since coiling dragon really happy about this continuation.
This is so good already and its only 50 something chapters in so far as good or better than the prequel.
Raw title: 我有一座天地钱庄
Status: 670 Chapters (Ongoing)
Translation quality needs some work.... Otherwise its a great novel.
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Good story
Plot holes not there till now
Chracter building and world building good
Story development going nice
Please please please please please please please please please please please please please post an update. It has been 8 months please. Your fans miss your writing
I would suggest webnovel to revert the name to original eng name. This name sounds bad. Also concerning the fact about the previous translator. They were doing it illegally.
A very good novel.
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So the shameless 5 star review shall be left here lol. In any case guys, this is basically the result of me reading so many eastern fantasy novels and me wanting to poke good fun at all the tropes that runs rampant in them. Really, if you feel like I'm insulting any of those novels, then I apologise and that wasn't the intention. In any case, if you enjoy it then lemme know and you can ask questions here as well.
For such a joking novel, there sure are a lot of powerful moments… It’s odd, I’ve laughed at this many, many times, yet at the same time, it’s still so POWERFUL. This novel makes me actually FEEL for the characters, and that is the sign of an incredible book. When you laugh at character’s antics and cry at their deaths. I can truly believe these are real people, they have so much personality. We don’t even know the majority of their names, and yet we can connect with them and understand them. Thank you for writing this, it is incredible, and I’m glad that I found it.
So, I tapped the link of your novel and it sent me to chapter eleven. Is this suppose to happen or is there something wrong with your link? Anyways, the author asked for a character review so I'll definitely do his request.
Based on what I've read, the character descriptions are decent but I feel like you could add more instead of writing "unknown man" just like in chapter twelve. Perhaps you could write, "A man wearing a coat of black sees Mandeep waking up from the machinery he is attached to. He catches the attention of the man beside him. The strange man murmurs, My ultimate creation is bla bla bla and things like that" Something like that but still, I'll be rating it five stars. Perhaps instead of (:) You could use (") instead.
This is just a suggestion and it's still up to you. :)))
Keep up the good work and soon you'll be a great author!
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