Entrail_JI
Old Fang is my favorite, the best dad I’ve ever seen
This has a soulmate reunited type ending ???? Happy ending, and a side pairing, and some more big brain movies waiting for you ??
Tf wrong with you?
its okey, kinda good but the storyline is kinda chaos but ig, BUT ITS SO DRAMATIC and it seems like the author likes little girls by the way he/she describes the women.
Because of MC's laziness (that is actually an incurable disease), the system takes over his body and does everything automatically, like cleaning MC's room. The system refers to everyone else as NPCs and gives MC options on how he will interact with them. This is all from the first chapter, and I'm already hooked. VOTE FOR THIS
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I'm planning on re-reading this the second time because in my opinion,this novel is simply wonderful!In the first 60/70 chapters the MC isnt all this thing,but slowly in the story the character start defining and becoming stronger and determinated.Even tought the real thing start 300+,the chapters before help a lot at knowing thw world structure and the characters.There is a slight yandere/bro-con warning but all safe!Only one love interest ,the love story isnt well structured,like one of a fanfiction,but still satisfating and a great "Green Flag Couple". I truly recommens this!If you have any questions,ask!
Im afraid this novel follows in the footsteps of many promising Xianxia novels. From chapter 1-50 it was a truly great start, 9/10, great characters, compelling story, well written. Chapter 51-100 faltered a little, but still a solid 7/10, the fighting scenes were needlessly long and some plot points stretched past any reasonable benefit of the doubt, but the story was still compelling, the pace steady, it was still a worthy novel. After chapter 100, and specifically chapter 128-130 which is one of the dumbest things i have ever read, things start to fall apart, the author starts making huge leaps of logic, characters behave erratically in service of the general direction of the plot over consistency, and the pacing grinds to a halt. This is just another case of an author having a great premise at the start, but once they pass that first prompt and have to start writing multiple new chapters a week without any real plan they just cant keep up the quality of the work. Its a shame.
You say that there a lot of harem novels out there but honestly, i can't seem to find them
As long as you can ignore the typical chinese novel tropes, it's good.
Wait, in what way does this book qualify as shota?
I'll post my review here since the review section didn't work for me. I hope the administrators would fix it soon.
I read till about chapter 300+ but stop when I saw he exchanged his retainer for a magic mines. For some reason it doesn't sit well with me when he sold his comrades for a mere mine. Imo, his character is ambiguous at most. He didn't exactly evil but not a good character either. The story itself is entertaining. Although, there's some minus that kinda hard to overlook.
1. it's obvious that this story was translated by several different translators (or even machine translator) so there's a lot of inconsistency on the naming things.
2. The change of phase between chapters are also kinda absurd, so sometimes I had to recheck to make sure I didn't miss any chapter.
Overall it's a fun things to read but it couldn't captivate me till the end due to the lack of decent translation and the character development.
