This story is actually really good compared to most of the works on here. However one thing i have to say is more actIon being done with the mc. I mean if he went back to the past then he should know about future business and stuff lIke that. Instead of being indisicive on what to do to have a more secure future
If you've read Ancient Godly Monarch, there's absolutely no reason to read this. It's the same old, "born with OP bloodline but abandoned
The narration of the story is beautifully done. The description of each character was well written. The development of the story and the background formation is smooth. Definitely one of the gems here at WN. Keep up the good work.
This is comedy-oriented story with some action in between.Problem is, this is low-brow comedy and fails miserably. It's as cliche as my friend's jokes he takes from internet.There's nothing interesting going on plot wise. It's dull and boring, witout any goal. Characters, including MC, are not really well fleshed-out. Translation is solid and so is MC's disciple Xiaobai. The rest is as average as the carrots I ate for breakfast today.
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