Love it! Overall a vary good story/novel. Writing is solid with only few mistakes. Very fleshed out story, characters and world story. My only concern is with some characters. It is hard to remember all of them. My advice for You is this: It is of great help for the author to have a notebook with all characters( their history, character, relationship, etc.). With it You can make some sort of glossary for Your novel. Then You can put it somewhere for us( readers).
This is an unpolished gem with intricate character and world design. Although some will find it hard to follow due to technical detail, I personally fell that the writer has put her love to it and strive for a better writing. Can’t wait for update please support this writing!
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The storytelling is fantastic. It feels like I'm right there with Zhang Xu on the soccer field, experiencing all his highs and lows. The characters are real, and their interactions keep me hooked.
This book nails the whole dedication and hard work theme in soccer. Zhang Xu's determination is seriously motivating.
The soccer scenes are so well-done. They're detailed but still exciting. You can tell the author knows their soccer stuff.
I'm totally rooting for Zhang Xu as he faces challenges and works on his skills. The Super Midfielder Training System adds a cool twist to the story.
Overall, this book is a blast. I can't wait to see where Zhang Xu's journey goes next. Whether you're a soccer fan or just looking for a good story, give this book a shot. It's a five-star winner!
Amazing, well written novel. Its one of the hidden gems out there. Mysterious, powerful but balanced MC from what I gathered in the 4 chapters. But its still early stages as we still dont know much about the world or the MC himself. But so far, so good and defo worth reading.
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The story is promising. I like how the grit and brutality was maintained in the mafia setting, which is often softened and romanticized in gang-themed romance novels. The quality of the writing can still be polished, but the technique is already there. The plot also offers something exciting to look forward to. Keep writing!
Hi my precious readers :) Although this is just a hobby, can I ask for your reviews? I mean, can I know if am I doing good? Or is my story sounds corny or a little cliche? I need criticisms since I am thinking of pursuing a writing career by publishing a book on amazon, thanks a lot though :)
This novel definitely has potential, but based off of the synopsis you have to be creative, and imaginative enough for each reincarnation
If you liked ready player one, you should like this book.
I like this novel and I am happy that this novel got picked because it's really amazing and alot of people are sad that my senior is to shady did not get picked and I can assure you that it's also a good novel, these two books are amazing and when I see someone post a one star review I am one hundred percent sure they didn't even read them, because if you had read both of them you won't even care and that's why I like this community and that's why this book still has a 4.6 star review unlike the other novel who got a 3.6 star review.
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