6 chapters in It's pretty good! It suffers a bit from "plot luck" where just the thing the mc needs just happens to be given to him, and I don't think it needs that. Him receiving the spirit stone didn't need to happen this early.Beyond that tiny issue though, I really enjoy the novel. The system is fun and the world seems to be a tad different than other cultivation worlds which is almost always good.Keep it up Author!
Writing quality started off alright, then slowly came to sh!t. The grammar mistakes (lots of em) come at around chapter 40. At this point, the writing is not even a fraction as smooth as it had been when the story started.
Can't say much about story development since I'm only up to chapter 58. All I can say is that it's quite boring at the later chapters, like you can predict what's going to happen. MC's merry band is equipped with thick plot armour and his only goal is to lead them to build a shop where they can sell goods.? I feel that author is downplaying the sense of danger in an apocalypse. It's like I'm reading a book about a party in a videogame farming for exp instead of an apocalypse story...
There's plus sides though, in the earlier chapters, the entire part showcasing MC's history was done splendidly, but it all went downhill from there. The author only uses MC's background to explain his skillfulness at killing zombies and doesn't touch upon it again. Is he worried about his remaining family or does he not care and wants to forget them? And the other main characters (his best friends) are not emphasised upon. (at least not at chapter 60, maybe they will be later). They seem like the bland side characters instead of the mains because the author doesn't put much of an effort to describe their relationship with the MC. Side characters are side characters. Up to chapter 60, we only now their names and their previous occupation or general information (she is a middle-aged woman!).
World background is actually pretty okay. Typical zombie apocalypse stuff yada yada. I like what the author did with the system, and explaining that those who couldn't take the pain at the start became zombies. He could build upon this and slowly reveal stuff about how it happened and why the system is in place.
I stopped reading at chp. 65 because of the bad grammar. If it's fixed, I may start reading again. The novel started off strong and i hope it can salvage it's quality in future chapters.
Vraiment très mal écrit. Besoin d'un éditeur!
This novel was honestly one of my all time favourites back when I started reading web novels over at gravity tales. Unfortunately, the company stopped translating the novel but still, it’s nice to see it. The Mc is pretty smart and likeable and there is a nice element of mystery to the world
That futanari introduction was just stupid. I think the author purposefully wanted to nuke this book because how the hell can you start out so well to end up at an army of futanari out of nowhere
I noped out as I've seen a few too many LNs with bad editing. It honestly seems promising. With the corona virus epidemic, depression has been at an all time high. So bad editing now bothers me more so than it used to.
Although as the Author I should be really biased and give it a 5, but I honestly don’t believe it deserves it. However, this is my first work and I want this to be a 5 and will work my hardest to make sure that by the end I can say that it deserves that a 5. I hope you’ll give it a read regardless and support me as I try and improve.
Shameless author's review! The story told in this novel is about Claire Collins. It details how she goes through many hardships and conquers her own demons among other things.If you like comedy, steady developing relationships, mystery and action then you've reached the right place! Don't hesitate to leave your comments, opinions and reviews!