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Great concept with lots of potential. The best things to work on with a small concept piece like this would be to expand on details and make the story more full and give it life. My advice to the author would be to keep writing and constantly look at others work as well as asking for constant criticism from family friends and strangers(doing great there). Keep on writing!
Okay so, I am here for a review. To be honest, I am not into fantasy stuff, BUT, this novel is unique and amazing. I read some chapters and it piqued my interest right away. This novel has great potential ahead. Keep up the great work!!! upload more chapters, your readers wants more ?
First of all thank you author for the nightmare I'll have tonight. Now since this work has only one chapter rn so there's limited information but for the first I'm getting a feeling that this work is going to be superb especially from the synopsis that make you imagine few things. I do sleep with my window open to get some cold pleasant air which now I believe I won't be opening till I forget this.By reading the first chapter and synopsis I can definitely say that this work will really horrify you and give you some goosebumps. Lastly I'll say the author to update it more and to keep his word to update it atleast 3 times a week, I will definitely read it once I get used to what I read today.
Author Here.This novel is a new take on the classic werewolf genre. Do consider trying this out. If you have any suggestions, please do voice them, as they help me improve my writing style.
awsome great............ happy to read good one to find................nice interested to read need more chapters to read .......all should read
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How come the author wrote something this brilliant. The chapters are quite long, and plotwise the book is like fire, spreading in the minds of the readers, to read more. love it.
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This novel is so cool! Highly recommended for someone who likes mystery genre. Okay, waiting for the next part, Sis!
Is this a joke? Where's the ambition, the urgency - emotions even! The protagonist isn't a human. He doesn't know how to think for himself, let alone what critical thinking is. You can put a human-shaped cardboard in place of the protagonist and still have story progress in the exact same way as this has been going. Nothing the protagonist does matters, even his cultivation depends on the author's mood. He will sometimes stagnate for years on end, and other times rapidly increase in cultivation with no rhyme or reason.
I don't know what the hype is about this novel, it's no where nearly as good as others, I guess it's because it's very mainstream people really like it. If you are looking for something innovative and exciting then don't read this, because it's not it's the same old novel like all other....mc gets powers and smashes everyone....nothing interesting at all, you can predict the end at the start.
