I only got to chapter three and while this story has great potential, it is extremely hard to get past the grammar errors. the style of writting Needs Improvement
I really like this new version than the old one for many reasons:1 Less nonsensical dialogue of the MC2 More stable personality of the MC3 Good flowthe rest are just minor issues, anyways, i still love thisKeep up the good work, AuthorLove you from the bottom of my Blood Dimension❤️❤️❤️
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This is just amazing... and I just love egotistical mcs... like the truly egotistical ones...lol... It gives that "the way of a demon lord" vibe or "life of a villain"... the story is amazing... Although I don't like the idea of the mc succumbing to the queen and just going along with her plans.. but I'm sure that will change as the story progresses
La historia es muy buena, el desarrollo del MC también mejoró mucho su carácter, lo unico si la emisión un poco deficiente pero bueno??????
Good story so far bad that there is only 26 chapters so far (I need read more I'm hooked) but its updated regularly
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why is this out of trial reads? fdsfdfddfdfddhsfdgfdgfgafdgfdgfdgfdgfdsgfdgfdgfdgdfgfdgfdgfdgfgfgfdgfdgfdgfgfdggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggg
I don't know about y'all but I kinda want to read some more chapters, naturally even though the further chapters might not be the best at least for now it seem decent enough to read.
First, I have to tell that I haven't watched the Clow Card Sakura series. So, I don't know how CCS fans will react to this book. But, this book is pretty unique in its own way. This book feels more like a japanese novel rather than a chinese one. The mc is more like a typical light novel mc who is always grumping and act cowardly but at crucial times, can be a brave hero. He is not like typical chinese mcs, who immediately changed and become arrogant, shameless or ruthless once he recieves some ability. He holds onto his principles very dearly, not like korean mcs who would adapt to all the darkness in order to survive. Although the plot is subpar, it is the mc's personality that draws me to read this story.
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great story, read the first 69 chapters before it became vip story.it is a decent read. this is a false mmo, basically a god created the game for earth to get them used to the game. mc died and went back to before the merger and gets a second chance.