This is a really good book! I really hope you continue and I really have enjoyed it! But you could make it just a bit more....Less active updates? It's like you're over-working yourself! But still, I REALLY LOVE IT!!! EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEP(No that was not because I needed to make it more than 140 letters or words lol)
The story is funny and interesting at the same time better than other books I read so far all I can say is that its a good story and I highly recommend it!
Fazit: Great read! Chapters are rather long (which I like). There are basically 2 MCs with funny dynamics between them. The writing quality (grammar and spelling) are good - things are easy to read. The cultivation speed is fast - so there are no "holdups". The world background good - interesting enough ;) So once again - give it a try, there are many free chapters to get your own opinion!
This book is fascinating......*Grin*? find out for yourself★♡★♡★♡★♡★♡★♡★♡♡★♡★♡★♡★♡★♡★♡★♡♡★♡★♡★♡★♡★♡★♡♡★♡★♡♡★♡★♡★♡★♡★♡★♡♡★♡★♡★♡★♡★♡★♡★♡★♡★♡★♡★♡★♡★♡★♡★♡★
The story is pretty good. I'll read it if you continue. You have to change the main character a little bit, for example, if you don't have legs, make yourself a stick or something like Ivar in Vikings.
Dude I liked the premise and some comedic elements early on, however honestly it became really shitty after trying to implement the harem scenario, try hard style.Like I thought when he went to kill the monster it could be an interesting arc of him on his own, maybe building more of a bond with Vanessa or vallentina whatever the slime is called, but instead you use it to really cringely push the characters together without thinking, hey maybe the two CHILDREN have parents... Anyway for those who enjoy it continue reading, but I'm out