aiiiiiii, we got an another one!!!.............................................................................................................................................................
why is this out of trial reads? fdsfdfddfdfddhsfdgfdgfgafdgfdgfdgfdgfdsgfdgfdgfdgdfgfdgfdgfdgfgfgfdgfdgfdgfgfdggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggg
Nice story and worlds building, although sometimes some actions might be contradictory to the character description of being cautious, but hey they still somehow fit good into the story and make it better
It's pretty well written. But there are some things im not comfortable with. The inner monologue, for example, is written in pretense tense and can sometimes be distracting since there are no italics. Other than that it's pretty well written.
