honestly, I think this would've been a lot better without the system.
MARVELOUS novel! It's the best one out there.Read it, quick please, I promise he won't drop.*blinking twice cause he's got a gun against my head* the mafia is real, it's zhen
@chapter 1 i can already feel that mc is a dog,not worth my,if you guys dont't like loser MC's like this better not waste your time reading this
I adore this story so much, started on a whim and was up at midnight still reading. this is a great treasure that has my heart feeling full, I want to tell secrets but I think any reader would want to add this to their library for them to enjoy.
This novel is a work of art. Your writing is beautiful, thought-provoking, and just a nail bitting experience keepingypu waiting for what's next.You put your whole heart into what you write, which I love. The content you publish is just awe-inspiring and addictive I can't wait for more
The translation is soo bad I don't understand why they even pay the translater for this mess. Maybe I would enjoy the novel more but whoever translated this mess literally makes everyone go read the plagiarized work Dawn of a new era just because people can actually understand it compare to this mess.
Great start! Love the concept and i really look forward to the romance „development“ part.
Based on the few chapters i read, the FL is awesome too!
Definitely worth a read so far!
Overall this is a very enjoyable story, well written besides an error here or there, but those are ignorable, with a very interesting main character who becomes more likable over time, some interesting love interest, and a dash of mystery that’s fun to think about. I think this is a story you should definitely give a try, you might have fun with it to be sure, but make sure to read the auxiliary chapter to avoid any momentary confusion.
To me it seems to be a story that I would like and has a lot of potential. But sadly the author has so much filler in the story that even after 40 chapters not even a full hour has passed in the novel. If you can stand the filler go ahead, but if you hate the author inflating his text count I recommend you dont even try it.
The novel is amazin has a lot of thing going for it but the Arthur is so stupid as to leave such and amzing work and start 7 or 6 new novels that he didn' even finish all his work are incomplete the novel deserves a better arthour then him he failed as an arthour starting so many novels to not finishe them I have been waiting for over a year for a new chapter.
This one is unique.I only see like this in faloo please keep it up for us readers❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
Another awesome book I've discover. This is such a good book to read. Your character design is awesome. Love your writing style too. Keep up the good work