Dear writer, I am waiting for the continuation of the story, I hope you can continue the story I am waiting for the continuation of the story, I hope you can continue the story I am waiting for the continuation of the story, I hope you can continue the story
As I look upon this book full of empty pages, I see my own reflection. And because my own reflection is so amazing and brilliant, I decided to rate this 5 stars.
This story feel like i am skipping too many thing..........
The concept of the novel is really good. This novel is worth to read. I love that there are elemental magic in the book. I can't wait to read the next chapters.
Not really a fan of transmigration and isekai genres on Webnovel, but I think this novel is a very fresh start towards this male lead genres and I think I will continue reading it ~~ Well, best of luck with your lucky book, author!
Story has great potential but Author is clearly lacking in storytelling.
Our Mc is starting three storyline together which got so confusing at a time that I had to dropped it.
I love this book it has a good character development and the writing is very good. Some parts make me laugh at what they say or how they express their emotions.
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Very good set up and original idea with good living character which can be connected to. The ability is balanced allowing for growth of the character being lengthy not like most system novels were the power level skyrockets
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The beginning 100 or so chapters are pretty decent honestly and would have gotten 4 stars or so. The last 40 or so chapters have been so godawful as to drag the entire story down a full 1.5 stars. MC has added several people to his harem for literally no other reason than his 'essence' being magic essentially, seriously.
A harem story is not necessarily a huge problem but the last 50 chapters have essentially been an erotica novel with perhaps the worst descriptions of sex I've ever come across.
I adored your story, you have a different approach and I think that is why I keep reading it.You have a great storyline and in my opinion, you must pay attention a little more to the details, but as far I can tell this is an amazing novel, can't wait to see how it's ending.