I love this book overall as a whole. Really I like all of the characters except one. the main female they made her too stupid. She really took the whole "dumb blonde" to heart. other than that I love the book. wish that we could get another book in the same universe. Maybe something with Samuel maybe five hundred or a thousand years later or something that would be awesome.
So i really like what i've read so far! I'm a huge fan of the whole ''agent/FBI'' vibe in the beginning, it really sets the scene.
Since there's only five chapters so far, i haven't been able to fully get a sight - but what i've read so far, was really good!
So it's a five star review from me <3
Brilliant work author. Adding a new force huh. In my next life if I'll have to study about this force too, believe me I'll not forget cursing you too. Btw nice to meet Paul, unlike yours my Paul is really in s/m stuff and I can really relate to Julien we think alike especially in football.
Anyway about your work, well it's good, I enjoyed, the only complaint from my side is the names of some of the characters, Paul, Julien okay but Alit.... Aldre... see I can't even write those names much less remember or speak. Well it's my problem I think.
Anyway, the story is smooth and you have an amazing world building and character designs are pretty good too. There were some grammer issues but since I myself is bad at it so I'm not sure if I can say it's error.
All in all a good read and definitely awesome for someone who is into science and for those who are not in science like me, you too should read it, either you'll start loving science or hating it all together. In the end I'll just say dear author please update it more regularly.
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Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact [email protected]. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
Hey there!
Good day for writing! If you want to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new works, you might want to contact
[email protected]. A brief introduction, some sample chapters, or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
I am the ruler of the heavens and all realms. I came to the earth unintentionally. After seeing the talents of the earth, I felt that the earth has potential. So when I left, I created 500 sets of systems like in the novels you read. , As long as like and reply 1, you can get the supreme system, and you don’t lose money. Don’t wait for the time to regret. So, what are you waiting for?
If this is anything like the author's previous work "The First Order" it has a lot of potential. I personally loved that book but it remains to be seen if this novel can live up to the hype. Regardless, I'm giving it five stars in the hope it gets selected and does indeed live up to the hype.
so far not a big fan the other trial read of same concept so far is better I like the premise and the upgrade concept but the mc is almost unlikable he seems like an idiot I like how it isnt smooth sailing for him and he already had a set back and his showing of stress after receiving a pet but I wish he was a little more likeable I guess hopefully gets better soon
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Story buildup is great , character development need improvement but it is good, hope you keep doing the hardwork and don't drop this novel. There aren't many stories that focus on world development here its great.
finally a mc reacts properly when put into a fantasy world like this! I will continue to be a reader for a while (more words so i can post a review)