wish fulfillment.
I like your story though at first i didn't like it based on reviews. it is decent story. though i feel sometimes i feel you are trying to make things too complicated at times. another problem in my opinion is your slow pace and due to which it can't be enjoyed in this webnovel chapter format. Yours is i think something to be read in bulk like after 5 or 10 chapter. Overall i like it. I think it is right balance somewhere between extremes of all wish fullfilment stuff where everyone worships mc and the other extreme where anything and everything goes wrong for mc. Yours characters also feel like people though mostly shitty though that is mostly real life things i guess. Everyone isn't a shounen character. though sometimes it goes too grimdark, i guess. Like everyone has something dark about them them. Also you should gauge your story every now and then between realistic stuff and entertainment for which most people come to read a novel. Too much wish fulment type novel get stale pretty soon but too realistic also have problem of not always being entertaining. Though best of luck.
I will follow your writing.
Hopefully the author doesn’t delete my review.
SPOILER
The Mc was naive for a very long time.(100+ chapters)You can’t even give a proper excuse for that. He was almost killed more than the fingers on my hands, yet he still chose to trust people? He was told multiple times to not do so but he doesn’t listen. Then his friends try to kill him for the sake of their clans, and they think all is well? He’ll listen and forgive us? Like we didn’t try to kill him. The only question I have is “does he forgive them”. The plot was good at first but now it’s just not good. It was dragged out for way too long.
Hopefully this novel gets a redo.
the store is going good so far. I try to find original source couldn't find it does anybody know what's the real name of the book. I searched in Chinese and other languages.
Interesting.................................................................................................................................
A great storyline, i love the whole image the Author has created. The words flow so well making each read admirable and the pace of the story is steadily, appreciable because of how the story is structured. A great read
this comes from author of legendary mechanic what more do you expect a well written story it's great the projection worlds are not just simple simulation but actual worlds this story gonna be lit hope the webnovel picks it up
Your Novel is great read up to 25th chapter so far however the fact that the mc has obtained a sss ranked bloodline so early in the series makes me upset becuase it will be the usual Op mc in attributes wise which wrecks the development abit however your book is still amazing so far and i hope that you have planned out a lot of ways to keep the book moving forward
can't wait to finish
can't waittttttt
love it
can't waittttttt love it
something to enjoy what nothing to do
Especially on your day off, really good
Thank you for finishing the story in the synopsis
Nice idea but poorly done. 140 characters llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll
I rarely write reviews but I've fallen in love with this story! It combines great storytelling with a unique concept whilst being just OP enough to be reasonable.
One of the best books on here imo