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Lot's of potential in the story and i like how you are able to describe the details....... I wish you good luck and can't wait to read further
Who wrote this stupid novel three and half year and he is giving advice to his father to re-marry whatever idc anymore
Just read 3-4 chapters u will know
Amazing story. The most unique thing about this story is that it is written by a Pakistani and written in Pakistani style. Good luck author in writing more novels in future
I enjoyed hope it atually gets updated rather than it being forgotten.
A well executed, generic disciple novel. This is unoriginal but I tend to like these types of novels. As long as you don't take it too seriously you'll find that it's a fairly inoffensive and laid back read.
Many generic tropes but the clean execution makes it difficult to have strong feelings (positive and negative ones) towards this novel.
This might have potential similar to the other fairly popular Master-Disciple novels out now so I'm giving this a generous score. 3/5
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Rather cliche system story, but that doesn't mean it's bad. What I dont like is how bad the grammar is and there is no improvement in fact i feel like it got worse, and since there is nothing new and interesting about this novel I'd rather not have to struggle to decipher what the author meant.
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Typical Japnese shy boy that have me questioning if he's actually gay. If you are into anime manga with high-school drama, cliché stuff about aggressive girl courting shy main boy then this is for you, I just grown out of this phase, it now becomes predictable and boring. No hate on the author, their writing quality is pretty good, just the genre that gutted my review.
The author is no amateur when it comes to writing, I love the way he describes the expressions, emotions and activities of his characters. His fight scenes are also wonderfully written, and it creates the perfect scenario in my mind. It's a great read, definitely one I'd stick to.
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