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If I were to rate my novel.
Writing Quality - 3/5, slowly changing to a 4/5 as my literary skills improve.
Story Development - 4/5 The beginning is quite slow, but it'll generally speed up as time goes on.
Character Design - 4/5. Characters aren't really one dimensional, but some are just made on the spot and left by the dust as one of the MC's acquaintances. Some will appear in different instances of the novel.
World Background - 5/5. The only thing I believe I did well on, not including the block of texts in the history chapter. (Don't read it unless you like that type of stuff.). The Frontier is the boundary of discovery and improvement. Follow the story as you see the progression of the MC and the improvement of my literary devices as times go on.
I just enjoy whatever novel it is, only issue with mad snail is dropping in the middle. but I like his novels TDG
This will be my first review ever but overall this book has amazing potential. Since I’m coming over from the authors fan fiction i already know that he has the capability and tenacity to makr this story shine and not drop it. Only wish he would give a little more detail to the characters so we can have a easier time picturing what they look like. Highly recommend giving this book a chance!
Nice story and good character progression ?
If your looking for a good romance and don't have a problem with the girl being the lead in the relationship I would definitely recommend it. This book quickly got me hooked, I have not noticed any errors in the writing and the character development is amazing. I am currently on ch 45 and my only comment is I hope that the author doesn't get so caught up in Sam's character growth they forget about Lena(this has not been a problem so far)
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Why are bad novels being picked?? is the editor able to read? they are all mainstream novels that "80% of the dumb reader base" will spend stones on. it's all a business decision at the end of the day. This is a business not a service for the reader(when it can be both). This platform has changed a lot from the start where it use to beg readers to use this platform. Now that it has the reader base its treating them like cattle and it's sad. I hope other readers see this too.
This novel was good until about 900 chapters went behind a paywall. It originally was free until chapter 900 something, but all of a sudden, almost all of those chapters required spirit stones to unlock. Very disappointed.
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Kudos to the author! I have fun reading and so far so good! I only found few grammatical errors but didn't mind it. Still the author made his narration fun so it will be enjoyable. The chapter was still few but I know that it has potential in the future. And again, thank you for making a wonderful novel for me to read!
If you have read Dark Blood Age it is pretty similar but the mc is ruthless and have a pretty powerful cheat with the former one did not have and the mc behaves like any normal human being would in the situation and does not act like the saint/hero and the MC mentions himself that he does not want to be a saint and I love it , if you enjoy the mc being himself you will love it too but if you the mc to a saint DON'T READ
I came here in search for the most deserving winner of WPC140 because I participated in the previous one myself, and I'd like to see how well the participants are doing for this biweekly prompt. I'd say, among all entries, this one is the most deserving for the gold tier award. It doesn't disappoint.
Writing - I love the style and the tone used for this. It's light, fun, and has a refreshing feel to it. I don't need to stress myself with grammar pet peeves because this has little to no error at all. Very understandable for a casual reader.
Stability - very steady, keep it up
Characters - gold-tier description, and they are really entertaining that they hardly make u bored
Development - nice, nice pace. I enjoy the comedy and the seemingly easy flow of the story's progression
World - vet vivid imagery, keep it up again!
Good luck! Hope u win! Read this everyone!