Great first chapter for "The Bloodborne Heir," Bartholome! Alaric's journey from orphan to finding a loving family is heartwarming. Subtle hints about his past leave the reader curious for more. Keep writing!
Good novel . i enjoyed reading it. there is no op ability and I like the chemistry between mc and first female lead(andy) ....
Hello folks! Author here.Shamelessly trying to get your attention.I hope you will react to this review and give my novel a read before you make any decision.I wont give myself too many stars but I will promise you stable updates.
Good story idea??. I hope you will make the king more ruthless ??to enemies and majestic as it is a medivial type of period and do not make it democratic only in The 17 the century. Also, try to let Mc participate in wars to develop a little warrior ?️?️personality also not only scholarly ?u200d??u200d?type. Also in the story Mc is a king not a civil servant so he should not feel embarrassing when his subjects bow to him. Being overly kind to subjects will make them easily make selfish arguments and rebellion for power
cool story, I like the in-depth fight scenes at the start and then easing into the main plot and a now with the lord causing trouble. I'm excited to see what else you come up with in the future!
All in all a generic chinese modern fantasy. Everyone thinks the MC is trash but secretly he isn't All the mobs are idiots who don't have anything else to do but try to make trouble for MC 'cause they think they are better than himAll the beauties want to be with MC just 'cause he's the protagonistWould be an okay read to pass time if the author would get someone to fix all the stentences that have words in wrong places
I cant take this book seriously. so my man artic dies by helping a woman, sO what does he fucking do after his transmigiration?!?! Thats right! NOT ONLY HELP A FUVKING WOMAN, GOVE HER KNOWLEDGE. precious Knowledge that is literally how people gain power!!! Oh uea dont forget the fucking broken power system. the power system is based on “laws” which can give you numerous abilities given how knowledgable you are, so if you arent seeing the problem here ill tell you, THE KNOWLEDGE IS SHARABLE, IF THERES A SINGLE GOD OUT THERE THEN THE ENTIRE WORLD CAN BE INFESTED BY GODS. I mean sure there are law againts doing this, this is kept in order by the other gods but theres nothing they could do if someone decides to do this, well untill its too late atleast. what stopping a man from printing books and books of knowlede Of Laws that can help you become a god and spread them across the world?! By the time Anyone noticed itll be too fucking late. if iM to talk about charectors, all ill say is thier dogshit, plain, and unintresting im every way possible. Hell the main charector is pretty much a Robot whos knowledable in Random shiT, who Knows why. The typos In the bigining of the storys are inumarable and countless. this is not helped by the fact How author changes Names and titles every other fucking chapter for no absolutefucking reason. All in all I lost a few fucking iq points. i dont Want to put the author down in any way shape or form but All im saying is, its a intresting idea but The author stumbles on the execution terribly. this is for the first few cHapters btw, so no doubt the autho got as the chapters went but i Just cant stand the First 50.
Action in which the author correctly and talentfully pays attention to all elements of the event. We observe the movements of the characters. We see the work of bodies and objects. We understand the past and future of the event. The Action genre demands spectacle and subtle psychology in the flight of fancy. The author is well qualified to do so. The book is written in sharp and literate language. We look forward to the continuance.
Really nice, but where's the rest now???... Thought it was complete, ooh God!!! Mira pls update now....????????????????????????????????????????????????????
Hey guys, I'm the author for this novel. As I am new to this, please give feedback as much as possible. I would like to thank you in advance for all the help that I may or may not get, depending on how this series goes. See you guys in the novel then, I guess.
My siblings and I all read this book, and it's no surprise why. The story is amazing, a mix of both comedy and tragedy, with hints of romance, at least in my opinion. If I have any complaints it'll be that the mc is so sadistic, but I guess that's one of his charms?
So this story is like a Hikaru no go meets League of legends, it's quite similar at the beginning but quickly branches off to its own thing mainly focusing on esports, becoming a pro and finding teammates for his team.