Overall nice novel! Writing Quality: 3/5. You should keep the consistency of your paragrafs more or less the same. I noticed that some times your paragrafs are soooo long. Try to keep them smaller for better reading. And try to separate dialogs from normal text so that thay are not so connected( sometimes it's hard to read because of that)Updates: 5/5. ;)Story: 5/5. The best part in my opinion.Character: 4/5. Very good but You should take some time with Your characters. It feels a bit rushed.World: 5/5. Excellent in my opinion.
So, here is my review. I think the story overall is good, but I feel like it's too little on the academy building and other characters. I somehow find myself skipping chapters in relation to the MC to get back to the scenes of him either A, doing something with the kids, or B, doing something with regard to the other characters. The mc annoys me, but that's primarily because his personality traits are of those people who irritate me in reality. (Not really a negative just an observation)It's a good premise just found myself getting a bit bored when the MC fell on the OP sword and then swung too "I must cultivate, cus weak right now" If his strength comes from being a headmaster...I would like to see more headmastering going on like finding more students, getting teachers, building relations with other schools...so on and so forth.
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I love the storyEvery twistKeep up the good work!!!!!!❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤?????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????✊??????????????????????????
Good Novel has a lot of potentials!! but it stops updating is this novel dropped? hope not.kasjdbfasjdf9hweioufh9wq8hefohasd8foa9sidhfoashdf8asudf8w [0sa89dfujoawief08qweofijas9odiufhas9i8efoiaefijas9d8jfo9asidjfoashe08fj oisdhofijas0efi9u[0wajefoiajsodif9asjfoashfdh9sadhuofjsaodf8
Hmm nicd story but you should start learning how to translate it in english better. As you can see you're novel is really good and have a potential. Only the translation is really a little unbearable to read. But still the story is good keep up.
Conceptually very interesting but the quality of the translation is so poor that it is nearly unintelligible. I really tried to like this one
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This novel (a gem by the way) disappeared from trial read even though it was not picked.Did the translation get permanently axed?Such a shame.
I need more this novel is too good????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
This novel is quite interesting but there is one major problem (at least for me) this story is not a Harem (at least not until chapter 20 where I am currently )It is pretty deceiving because I thought it would be a interesting harem story with the stars of the 80-90, it is not. What i think the author meant by putting a Harem tag is That the MC will have many s*ex partners but not a "Real" harem nor will he have any Romance, and I find it really Unfortunate.
This book is amazing, the writing and plot are outstanding. The way that the author weaves the words of his book and shows the feelings of the main character makes you feel apart of the story itself. Would definitely recommend this book to anyone.