From what I’ve read, the concept of the story itself isn’t bad. The story on the other hand is a mess. The chapters introduce a new character almost every chapter and doesn’t bother to develop them. By chapter 25, I’ve been introduced to more than 15 characters who have no connection to the Mc. Most of them only appear for once chapter before the next chapter switches back to the Mc. I have nothing against knowing a lot of characters or some background information, but throwing a bunch of irrelevant characters into the story every other chapter just makes the reader confused and lose focus.With how much POVs you keep switching too, at this point I doubt if the Mc is even the Mc.
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Late review but here's a 5 star, I think you fairly deserve it as the book didn't fail to entertain me as a reader, plus the writing is great there's really nothing I can complain the book is amazingly done.
Bagus sih ceritanya tapi tolong translite tin dong soalnya msh ada kata2 yg saya krang faham mungkin klo di transleit ke bahs indonesa saya lebih faham hehehe... Itu sja sih makasih
Really big fan of this story so far! It is very well written without too many noticeable mistakes, has an interesting no nonsense MC (with a good excuse for why he would be living in a game world 24/7), and the game world itself is extremely enticing already with plenty of room to grow as the story progresses. Can't wait to read more!
Interchanging use of her and his. Good start. Fast pace. Horrible translation. Read up to chapter 34.
Out-of-the-norm, must-read novel, different than most xianxia novels out there! Well, I am sad that the Power ranking is low. But well everyone has there own taste. In short, this novel won't waste your time.
Está história e muito boa ( falando daqui do Brasil) , eu leio várias novels em vários sites diferentes mas está está no top 30, valeu por traduzirem para o inglês, falou fui
Just one word..This is awesome.Characters are very well designed .Plot is good.you won't feel bored reading this one.MC actually thinks before acting and there are no bull**** fillers .to be honest it is a good change of pace .
I was already boared on martial arts, transmigrators and system novels nowadays, discovering this is my greatest pleasure and joy. MC's route is unique, even the plot is something I always look forward too, even the side characters is likeable and relevant...not just some literal side characters who would be buried by time?. Also! The author is really amazing for not filling in useless romance nor harems that make stories less enjoyable, I really like the consistent pace and the mcs uniqueness. This is something everyone should read!
Stats and First impression:-Website: Qidian CNStatus: Ongoing with about 2900+ chaptersViews: 3.57 MillionRecommendations: ~60 ThousandNo. of Works: 2Rating: 8.8/10 from 47 usersWhy did they sanction another cliched novel to be translated? I know cliches can't be avoided but it can be covered up with better writing but this novel is one of those which has a stale plot and cardboard characters, I'm sure of it after reading the raws.... Who decides on the novels to be translated? Don't they have better taste? There are clearly better novels out there but why sanction this novel containing recycled plot. Guys CN readers have rejected this novel! Do you know how? Look at the no of chapters, its close to 3000 chapters but look at the no of ratings, its only 47. Compare the no of views with recommendations, its 3.6 million views against 60 thousand recommendations. It clearly suggests that readers only bothered to check this novel out when they didn't have anything better to read and they didn't even bother to recommend it to others or even rate the novel for that matter. If you like transmigration CN fantasy novels with a stale plot and cardboard characterizations, then this novel is certainly for you!
I like It, give a try to this novel people-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------.