Decent stuff so far but I'm not sure the system he received is all that great, comparatively.I'm also hoping for some character development, for example we find out that he had a family that got killed at one point so finding out about this or how it happened during some introspective moment.Also, so far, there's a stat in the system that just hasn't really been explained yet, his 'learning ability' stuff so it isn't really even relevant atm.
I read this book, and I gotta say, it's quite the interesting story line you got there. Seemed quite peachy at the start but great overall. Plus, love the comedy.
Beauty After Quest Online is a novel about the young man who is honest to every lady his eyes lay on. It's enough, gentleman. Ah, he is quite shameless! It's enough!Now, let's speak about reunion fetish. It's something... really hard to find. Actually, I myself found out about it thanks to mah bruhs reading mah novels... But come on! What the ****? Don't you like reunions? The moment you see a beauty back, the moment she whispers the words 'I missed you', the beautiful connection that just squeezes out with all this longing... This... Oh my... Hy! Hy! Hy! I am sorry, gentleman... Something beautiful popped in mah mind... Anyway! It's so beautiful... yet there is already someone attacking mah reunion fetish! I take it as challenge, thus, the war shall erupt!One simply does not **** The young Paranoid!
This review is based on the latest chap (48).He is a beta tester which means that he knows where to get the correct quests, correct items, correct people to talk to, background story of the game etc. So it’s almost the same as those reincarnated novels. They know the cheats.What I dont understand are two things:1) he told some people that he’s a beta tester which is the reason for his OPness. He killed more than 100k players in a quest. that’s how op he is. Considering humanity’s greediness, i dont know what will happen. 2) there are some players who have legendary weapon. He’s beginning to question that to the point of telling it to the admin for investigation. the reason, there shouldn’t be a legendary weapon this early in the game. So, he knows almost all the cheats to get stronger and then he’s not happy that some people has legendary weapon. If you’re a player and found out that he’s a beta tester and seems to be the reason for him being stronger, what would you do?For the bright side, I think the world backGround and story is good and it has potential to be great. There are a lot of secrets to be explored especially some twist and turns of the main dev of the game. Character interaction are ok as well.The action scenes are great by the way.
This is a great book. i find myself so intrigued in the story as i am reading that i look a the time one min its say 1pm the i look again to find it's 5pm. the story is aslo well thought out and each characters have well defined personalitys and description that you can seen it in your imagination.
There are so many Grammar mistakes that it is making it hard to read and i do hope author that you can ask help from someone on proof reading your chapters before it is uploaded, but all in all it has potential to be a great novel.
I like your previous work quite a bit and although this is in the early stages im quite excited to see how this turns out in the future keep up the good work
This is a masterpiece best system novel ever ?????
I just kept comparing it to the legendary mechanic while reading this and so far from what I read (c40) it is considerably worse. Pros: Unique world setting wasteland steampunkishSomewhat interesting golden finger.ConsGets a cheerleading fatty that stands at the sidelines right at the beginning.The mcs class let's him learn the other classes skills but cost double expThe mcs golden finger is just ripped off from star craft.I feel like this is one of those fanfictions where the author just puts their character in the universe of a another novel.The game system is similar the world setting is similar (they both find a hidden world plot that was never done before) even the next update to the game is the same (introduction to space)This is just a meh fanfiction that isn't as good as the original
I really like this novel and it's my favorite novel now. I had enough of all the stupid mcs who think with their **** and does stupid young masters so i was looking for a like time for a novel like this l. But the translation is a little bad partly because he doesn't has an editor to help and the problem is nobody likes these types of novels they like does annoying harem novels withs lots of faceslaps. What basically happens in those novels is tge mc goes to a place the annoying young master looks down on him then he starts to fight the antagonist says the name of his technique the bystanders keep says the mc is going to lose he is week he can't win and then bam!!!. O and it still isn't finished the young masters whole family goes after hin annoy him till he destroys the family. And the keeps on repeating itself. I used to like it years ago when i first started read Chinese novel but now it's very annoying and keeps on getting on my nerves. What i hate in Chinese cultivation novels:1: fighting enemies with cultivation a lot more the you. 2: be very young but still stronger and smarter than people millions of years older then you.3: heals limbs and his whole body easily even when he becomes a lot stronger.4: Cultivate with a unique technique and become so strong the cultivation levels don't matter (one of my favorite things in novels is when he enters new cultivation realms so my favorite movels Re the ones whose cultivation is the same as everybody alse.5: Harems And forget many othe important ones.
Out of all the modern cultivation stories I have read I would rate this the best. Mainly because the character hasn't reincarnated from anywhere and isn't constantly offending people. The story unfolds in a pretty organic way and isn't rushed or slow.
Currently 649 chapters into the novel. As per the title, it’s a story revolving around our young judge MC who aspires to reach the softlife in an organisation that oversees the peace of the continent despite beng the enemy of the entire continent itself.Anyway, the thing that makes this novel attractive, in my opinion, if the MC himself. I really like how Yang Qing’s character is being portrayed. He is lazy, playful and silly most of the time, but when it comes to his duty, he’s like a different person entirely. Above all, the quality of storytelling and writing is something I haven’t seen for quite some time. As a reader, I really appreciate the author’s work as this novel is able to reel in my emotions along with the story as I read through the chapters. And so far, its quality of writing doesn’t diminish like other novels do. This story is indeed a bright gem among the ocean of novels here ✨