very badly written too cliche there was no need for the girl, in the beginning, to be present or even be with the mc not being misogynistic but it's just too cliche I am starting to hate romance/harem in novels its just bad to me The system is way too controlling the MC doesn't fit the character of someone who should be the sect leader Everything is done too hastily
Though I have a few bits to criticize, it's good so far.The first, and most important, is that all the dialogue sounds like the same person. It helps a lot with fleshing out a character to give them a unique voice. It doesn't have to be as large a change as Yoda or as obvious as the "desu" some authors plant at the end of a sentence, but it really helps if something changes based on who's talking. It also helps break the feeling that you're reading someone tell you a story instead of reading a story.Another thing to remember is that events in reality have a pace to them. It can be easy to write paragraphs about the thought process in the moment, and maybe that's how it actually happened in their head, but readers either lack the speed of thought or the IRL influence forcing their attention so it draws ******* out of a situation. If the situation is easy or doesn't require their attention, that makes sense, but if it's a desperate or intense situation it can disconnect the reader from the story. Basically, try to keep the intensity of the reader's experience the same as what's going through the MC's head.
Just NO - I deleted my first review cause I tried to get to ch 40 and it just got so much worseThis is a cheap Chinese rip off of pokemon Bad storyHorrendous translation qualityNO Character DesignNegligible World Background
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Website : qidian china Views : 3.61 million Rating : 8.4(668) Chapters : 2071Status : completed Word count : 5.13 million author rank : platinum
Seriously, I regret reading this one. If you are reading this before you read the novel then just stop. I mean it. If you are already reading it, wishing that it will get better then just stop. It will never get better and it will just repeat the old trope of 'my fiancee/friend is kidnapped so I must power up.'I started reading the novel yesterday and I think it's readable at first. 'Cliche powerless transmigrator has a fiancee that gets bought over by a rich man with awesomely high position in the kingdom and to take revenge, the author will give him the godly plot armor.' I'm very interested in this kind of story and I've already read many kinds of novel with the same pattern. They also get utterly bad reviews but nonetheless I still enjoyed them and read them until the end.But damn this novel is utterly bad that I had to waste my time just to write this review.It started interesting to me. MC beats everyone up except the elders who are too strong but it gets annoying as time goes on since MC just can't resolve himself to kill since he is so righteous and his principles will never be broken even if he dies.This is common. It is annoying but the exciting story on how MC will achieve greater reward in the end becoming the thug life of the country and everyone kneels to him makes me enjoy the story.But this novel didn't give a **** about that...In this novel, MC is just a frustrated kid crawling amidst endless storm that just come to him for no freaking reason. All of the young masters are horny for his fiancee, friends and even his treasures. If that's not all, those young masters will not stop at that. The first MC's rival don't even have a shred of pretense and will just keep on sending minions to annoy the MC to death. And this trope of sending troubles will just repeat itself until even the graves of the ancestors of the enemy will crawl up just to make the MC suffer.Of course MC will not die because that would be the end of the story. Random treasures will randomly appear under his feet. Random breakthroughs because those treasures are not completely refined.That's fine in all. It is a cliche in eastern fantasy novel but damn this always happen even afters 400 chapters had already passed.MC has a time cheat where his body will be in a state of time acceleration making him cultivate in almost 500x faster than anybody in real time. And this cheat was never showed its potential at all. It's just a cheat to compensate for his talent which is basically none at all. Author will just randomly say out of nowhere in the fight that MC used his time cheat to comprehend this godly techniques before the fight and boom enemy defeated.Seriously I started loving this novel when Su Yu entered the arc where he was taken in by the Duke to be fostered as a talent and marry the main heroine Xianer but author just flipped the entire novel's potential when everything was in chaos. The prince of the kingdom raided the Duke's palace with a fake imperial edict and now everything is fked. This chapter started the endless cycle of power up and revenge. Story cycle:Friend/Fiancee Kidnapped - - - -> MC powers up by going around the mountaind randomly stepping in godly cultivation treasures - - - - -> Badass MC comes face slapping everyone in his path -------> MC will beat up main target of revenge but all of enemy's allies from the elders, patriarchs, or even the rotting ancestors in the graves will rise up just to beat up the MC until he is coughing up blood in regret asking why the heaven is so cruel - - - - - -> MC will almost die and suddenly discovers a random cave where he will breakthrough to an unknown realm - - - - - - > An even more badass MC will come out with a change of hair color and more handsome than before. He will face slap everyone until he meets an elder who actually has a connection to a powerful sect - - - > Gets beaten down until gets his a$$ saved by a random person - - - > RINSE AND REPEAT
This novel is different n refreshing, the female lead is different from the usual stereotypes of fl, and until now (ch 40) we still didn't know who's the ML, I just hope this is a reverse harem novel ? but sadly this kind of novel only have a minority fans ? I really hope this one will continue to update ?
Firstly I honestly gotta say, what is up with all you people? Are you some kind of water army? .-. I see it in so many novels, without many chapters, right from the start there are lots of ''reviews'' giving 4-5 stars. Yet none of them is even a real review but a senseless upvote without explanation and no real review. SO ffs please give a real review with reasonable starts and explanation why it is so when giving a review. (Rant end, dat really bothered me for a long time.) Now for the review itself. It is just a temporary one and will be changed after 100+ chapters are released. Right now it is just meant as an overview for the current chapters.Translation Quality: I give that one 4 stars, 5 would mean perfection but nobody is perfect. Yet I did not find any big mistakes or anything noticable. As such the translation quality is very good and the flow of the story is nicely done. No issues here. If it keeps up like this this score will stay the same. Update stability: I give that a 1 star rating for now and shall wait to a point of 100+ chapters to see if it keeps up. If yes I naturally will raise the rating. Story Developement: Same as Update Stability, alas I will give it a 2 star rating for now as it seems to go into an interesting direction. Military seems interesting, and the idea of the story is a nice one too.Character design: For now I will give it 2 points too. For the ****** reason that it is only 21 chapters for now and the character is still in the establishing phase of the story. I have to little info to work with it. Alas the character itself does seem ok at this point. I have not found any issues as of yet, at least no major ones. (Can't be worse then cobi anyway)World Building: The world itself seems very interesting, the flux energy and the shadow haxx. I am tempted to give it 4 points right now but I wont do it yet. Reasons are that the world also is still in establishment phase and a lot is still to be known. There also is still the possibility of author san fucking up terribly with that and leaving out endless details and explanations. Right now as example I am wondering what the hell is the 5th dimension. Is it an dimension of its own? If so whats so different about it? Are there other dimensions? I basically got told nothing cept yup, tis the 5th dimension. No info no nothing. If there will be more infos on such things and explain things about those places which seem common knowledge in the story I will rate it higher. The end. At least for now, I am quite interested in this story for now. Let's see if it keeps up or if I will get disappointed.
Wow this novel started out great but absolutely sucks now. Not sure why this is rated so highly, started reading it for the dark grimy mood but turned into a cheesefest with **** comedy. Not for me, and funny how the Author ignores every constructive criticism and only responds to positive ones. Well I doubt the novel changes much but I don’t really want to waste my time reading this. And the is married after 10 chapters lol. What a way to ruin it.
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Ch 109 110 has wrong novel chapters , please change it
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