Said Gangsiran , reaching his waist and pulling out a small knife and going to the bamboo culm.
The energy was washing over him and he felt rejuvenated. He got up quickly, there weren't even aches or pains. The sad thing was that master Strocker was now sitting on the throne, and worst still the man in blue was next to him attending to the wounds.
But now…
I really like the the story, reading this novel makes it obvious that the writer is a christian, and I really love the way he has with his words. The writing as nice and describes the story very well. Summary: Just read the story You'll love it
So far as I read, this book is fun and exciting indeed, and love the way the protagonist's power improves and develops. Moreover, he is also a genius boy because he can rapidly skip the step of Qi that no one could do. So, that's why I am starting to like this book. I'll keep following the next chapter :)
Leo: so I wasn't hallucinating?
Hi there, Author here. Just leaving a comment and leading a good example for the future. Thanks for joining me on this journey! Gotta give myself five stars ?
What do I say? The mc is clearly going to be a perverted mc with a harem. One of the first things he "accidentally" does is jam an object up a woman's *parts* and doesn't apologize at all, instead laughing. He gets a cheat item, which will very clearly make him op and stronger than any other character you see in the novel. All other characters seem very one dimensional. A supremely attractive elf (because, clearly, all female elves must be the sexiest thing to ever grace the mc's eyes) is saved by the mc and falls in love with him for no other reason, except that he "makes her life feel more complete
Oh am really enjoying this book of yours the characters are great,t the plot and the writing style is good keep it up author,I have add to my library for update
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The author is a cool dude, he did a good job on the content of the book and created something that can be read with pleasure. I can only wish you good luck and hope for new chapters
A funny use of the norse mythology and the others with a fast pacing rather nice if compared with many other novels way too slow in a rather complicated world where gods, magic and cultivation are mixedThough you really need an editor to correct the mistakes because sometimes it can be hard to understand what you mean, I also saw that you repeated some sentences twice on some chapters. So an editor could help you correct what maybe you won't see when doing it yourself (don't forget that your readers will be happy to help you if you need us for that).And also it's only my opinion but 6 and 10 years old is kind of too young for what happens to them even if they are more mature or grown up.Keep going and good luck Mr/Ms Author ?