A New Chapter A New Oneshot

Has potential. It's both very original, while still maintaining some of the good ole cliches. I look forward to what the author will show us in the future.

The MC is a cuck and the novel is 95% about ghosts so far. Many actions of the MC pertaining to women are baffling. It's not really a cultivation novel at all except for the power system being "cultivation". I'm sure you understand what I mean if you like cultivation novels. The story and actions all over the place, things just happen randomly, it's a blend of genres that doesn't work. Subpar piece of work with a great concept.

Another GREAT novel by Adui!                                                                                                               .

amazing ?............................................................................................................................................??

There are so many Grammar mistakes that it is making it hard to read and i do hope author that you can ask help from someone on proof reading your chapters before it is uploaded, but all in all it has potential to be a great novel.

it's okay autor is sometimes lazy in the early chapter , the story is also good the problem is him hiding his background and that It turned to a premium novel