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this novel worth the read.
I will give this novel around 4.2 stars, but to balance out negative review that has been given even before the novel has been released (idk why) ill give 5 stars.
This a very good story but for unknow reason we can’t Have the full story here, but it’s possible to find the full story elsewhere for free. Anyway don’t stop here and go find the rest of the story.
Awesome novel where the MC loses his humanity and does whatever it takes to grow stronger without any sense of morals. And the MC is actually not a hypocritical bast*rd and does not suddenly gain any conscience. This nivel is not for those who like MC that are "goody two shoes".
The storyline seems interesting, the book will become more solid if you give the characters more depth. Keep up the good work and the book more unique.
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This novel is barely in the reading to pass time zone.
The problem is that the world building and the mechanics of the magic system aren't defined in a consistent way. Which leads to the MC being awesome, but not comparable to anything.
If one can reach a rank with enough training, why does the difference between spells matter so much? Why is it important to condese magic power? The author simply tells us it is and we as the readers have to accept it.
An example is the fact that the MC always practices only the basics of magic and so far only one element. Why? Why are the basics so important? I understand that the basics can strengthen the foundation and this is important, but even the most patient and wise humans on the planet know that advanced techniques are important in any field, that is why they were developed.
It feels like the only reason the MC practices at all is to get the system rewards, which is what actually gives him strength.
It is like he goes to work every day for money, he doesn't gain anything during practice, he just gets rewarded for doing so.
MC is also way to passive and mostly a nonentity in this story. We could literally exchange him for any other student and nothing would change.
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Hopefully nothin bad ends up happening to his family
But so far so good loving the story line so far I was a huge fan of celestial peak so I look forward to this new piece of work
This story is well built and the plot seems promising. I'm looking forward to where the author takes us to. I've only read a couple of chapters though. Keep posting~~
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I can’t wait to see more in this novel, until now i can feel the pain in her. The way that author explained is easy to understand the feelings in this new novel