My main problem with this story is the lack of descriptions. I have seen no mentions kn the features of the characters, other then they are pretty or have a good body. That is not descriptive enough. Instead of saying talk about their hair color, height, etc. I do like the idea of the story so far and its interesting. Great job so far, keep up the great work!
I havent been able to get on for three days!!!!!! ThIs is the last book I will be reading on this sight. I didnt know when i started reading this book that i would have to wait 12 hours before the next chapter!
I was supposed to like this. I've been on the prowl for a good novel with an evil protagonist for quite a while, and this appeared to be exactly that. Any average joe that enjoys a morally corrupt protagonist would be delighted at a story like this, furthermore, it's set in the land of legendary Gangnam style, they should love this right?Well, here lies the problem; even though the protagonist is evil, he's fkin insufferable. My god the number of times I wanted to close this because of the paragraphs dedicated to his philosophical hogwash on someone or something - and might I add elementary level hogwash at that, it ain't even THAT deep or thought-provoking. If the author could focus more on the story than what our protagonist thinks if someone's a hypocrite, a supremacist, or another evildooer, it would delight me.
A hundred years later, you’ve walked to the end of the road.You turn around and realize something...You’re f**king old.
I just love this Novel so Far. And inalso love the dYnamic between the two.
Had potential. Starts off good but turns into bad MTL . ... ...
I really am a sucker when reading zombie apocalypse! This novel kinda reminds me of left four dead, so I expect a lot of great things here in the novel and its succeeding chapters. However, there are some points I'd like to discuss. You need to establish the virus and its background. How it was created. Who created it. When did it started. Although you could start with the apocalypse right off the bat, someone must explain what happened and what are zombies. Zombies are undead creatures that we all know and love, but you still need to explain what are those walking corpses and add something out of it. Grammars and such can be learn so I'll leave that part out of the way. Kudos for the author!
Pretty cool story, and I'm not too into thrillers, it's an over all interesting concept. Other than your grammatical mistakes, and poof choice of words here and there, it's a good read.Keep up your work, and practice english a bit ;)
This book is really well written. The start is unique and what I love is that. The MC has to fight for his things. It's not like his first cheat is the best in the universe.There are some grammar mistakes but nothing proofreading can't fix.Although the capitalization of letters can be a bit annoyingGreat story keep it up.
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