Don’t need to say much things. just read it and decide yourselves. If you are not into mmorpg or video games or or or not even playing any games you can still find this funny but can’t understand much. Anyway. Good piece
The story is really good really touched my heart. With beautiful descriptions and imagery, it is almost like a heart touching poem with plot.
It isn't like the other novels that I have read so this made me really appreciate this novel. Would love to see more
Surprisingly it is a masterpiece, this novel is exactly what we expect to see from the war&military genre
Can't wait for the next update♥️?♥️♥️♥️♥️????????❤️❤️♥️????
Nicely done????. More chapters please‼️‼️
This books has My heart ❤️ ?. The characters here are so good and their development, feelings in each and every chapter is so beautiful like how beautiful Author design them and describe their unconditional love is such a beautiful thing.
i get this is fiction but the author is comparing these kids to pro player? honestly losing brain cells reading this
Needs a rewrite... the grammar is so bad it's practically unreadable...
As of Ch. 225 I’ll be honest I’m a little torn on my thoughts on this novel. I shall explain why.First of all the overall concept of the novel is great, author does well to make sure there are no plot holes in terms of the MC’s decision making or how he advances in strength. The pace of the novel is also good, it’s fast enough that you can enjoy the progress and also understand what’s going on. The word count for every chapter is also really long, and finally the storyline itself is GOOD.I’ll be real though, there’s a massive info dump in this novel. It’s not very noticeable early on but as you hit the later chapters, it goes into extreme depth with the MCs thought process, reasonings behind his actions and then over explains everything that’s happening.I, for one, don’t mind info dumps if they’re done correctly. But that amount I’ve read, and where the story is currently at don’t add up. It becomes a pain to read at some point because you can see the MC being fleshed out and improving with every chapter but in the grand scheme of things the MC is literally going from a power level of 10 to 11 and the people he’s catching up to are sitting on 100. (This is an example, not a spoiler).The crazy part though is that because every chapter is condensed (and long which I like), you can’t help but think that the story is progressing well when in reality there’s not a lot happening (much like DBZ fight).Sigh aside from the insane info dump, the only other thing I can point my finger at is that things that happen in the novel seem erratic and displaced. For instance, the MC will be breaking through a stage, and then the POV will randomly switch to his senior sister going through her own troubles, and then it’ll switch to some random disciple from a different faction talking with his faction friend etc.This just led to me skipping over some sections because I was just more interested in what was happening with the MC and I think that takes away from what the author was trying to do. Ultimately, the problems I’ve mentioned aren’t super big and can be improved upon and I think it’ll make the nocel much easier to read. If you’re considering reading this novel just go ahead and have a read. It does start a little differently that most other novels like this start but the storyline starts to get interesting after the first few chapters (I think 10?).My brain hurts.
this is good, mc is cursed and everything he do will be reversed... at first I was started getting annoyed by his teacher actions.. but then I found it amusing... story is fine.. what I like most is mc himself.. his actions are funny and dialogues are quite enjoyable to read... I did like to read further...
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