I see This Boy has Bule Sliver Grass Can They Trace That Sliver Glass Then Look into His DNA And Trace his Ancestor Becuase Soul Land Is Then It Continues
This man got skills in writing
Brilliant efforts!!
The plot of story the characters
The emotions
The feelings
Everything felt soo accurate.!
The story is pretty suspenseful which is quite fun to read
Love on your work from my side
Waiting for the continuation
please write more often I loved this story and have been looking forward to your updates
Amazing story. The most unique thing about this story is that it is written by a Pakistani and written in Pakistani style. Good luck author in writing more novels in future
Reading this novel after the initial 80 chapters have given me nothing but boredom and disappointment. Every chapters feels like a filler. Battle description is so-so and it only happens every other tens of chapters. haa my expectations for a somewhat good start became failure.
... well.. grammar is good. But i hated that mc basically went from sick and malnutrited level 1 kid the size of a chair with nothing that has the strenght of a sick dog... then he opens the starter pack and gets....to being level 100, 6''3 tall with 8 pack muscles. 9 inch D. With a godly rank sword, a godly rank sword skill and enough money to shame anyone, 2 godly physiques that can charm any woman alive with no effort thst has dual cultivstion and merge any new future phsyque he gets at chapter 3.... honest. He got soooo many overpowered things that is extremely excessive and ruins any progression that the story may have. Any random of these cheats is already enough but so many at once? It would have been 10 times.better of he got these slowly in a period of like 30 chapters or more
Despite the MC having no magic core, he didn't give up and keep training his Will so that he can fulfill his wish...
F*ck this....
140 characters!!!!!
Great novel, I have read till chapter 60 and it has been a wonderful experience. Other than minor grammatical errors (he/she),(his/her) this has been great for me. I sincerely hope that the author keeps up the good work and this novel gains more recognition.
I must say, best story I've ever read so far, kudos to the Writers [img=recommend][img=exp]....
and about the Antihero Antagonist you should make him venomous rather than being somehow good.....
I think i can't continue this book.
While the first chapter was interesting and seemed to promise many good things , i'm finally left disappointed.
Don't get me wrong. The story isn't bad.
It's just that i can't get into it.
- The pros :
. Transmigration is well done( we saw a glimpse of mc's original life and he doesn't adapts directly ro his new environment , nor does he realise quickly that he is in a novel.)
. The writing( although with some fruits here and there) is really of too quality, for a novel of this platform .
. The Mc's life is not smooth sailing since the start.
. The first chapter is one of the best introductory chapters i saw on this platform( simple yet effective).
. The author is dedicated
- The cons :
First, the Mc. I pity him but he is honestly sooooo irritating . He is afraid of what might happen to him but he always let the flow of the story drive him, as if he can't think of a plan for himself. Plus, he is always frustrated , not calcalutive at all( which he should be a minimum), and "frank" in a dumb way ( who would show their boss that they despise him or do not want to do their assignated task? Your life DEPENDS on the crown prince so you ought to at least pretend and behave in front of him. But the Mc doesn't even do that. ) .
I can accept a Mc with an average brain. But if this one isn't hard working enough to compensate for his/ her weaknesses , if he/she is frustrated by his/her situation but doesn't lift a finger to get out of it and only goes with the flow, then he/she is not worth it.
Plus, what is even his personality?
Even after reading 17 chapters , i get the feeling that i don't know him. A part from not being a "light" , being frustrated about his situation, being the Mc ... (i don't even know what to say about him besides this three points , which proves even more that i don't know him) ...What defines him?
And if one tells me to wait for more chapters before giving my opinion i will disagree with him/her, because the early chapters of a book are supposed to be the appetizers. If i find them this bad, how much longer should i hang on for good chapters to come, while i can invest my time in seaching for better works?
Second, The atmosphere in the book.
This point is personal.
I don't like the atmosphere in the book.
I like it better when a book switches between different tones. In this one however , i get the feeling that everything is always serious, which is a bummer for me . The author could have added comedy ( although he/she tried often but failed at it) , and some lighthearted moments( The author could have given him at least one friend). Or any other thing that wouldn’t make it so hard to digest.
Third, the pace and the writing.
I can understand that this type of plots needs time to unfurl. However, i get the feeling that nothing really important happens( it is too slow or too uneventful). When i read the title of the book, i prepare myself for a good dive in conspiracy and scheming.
But there isn't much( if any), where i'm at.
Then how about action? The same! I didn’t witness that much action and when it happened it didn’t drew me in.
Like i said above, the first chapters are supposed to draw one to a book's story .
However this book's 2 to 17 chapters failed at keeping the interest the first chapter earned it.
Overall it's not a bad book. It's maybe that it is too low for the expectations that i had .
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First, I have to say the writing quality of this book is magnificent. The story development has been excellent and the world background is amazing. This isn't the normal cliche system books. It is unique and this is definitely a good read.