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Writing Quality - Well-written novel that does not have many noticeable grammar mistakes. Dialogue between characters are good and have variety to them based on characteristics of the people speaking.
Stability of Updates - New chapters look like they are being released in a consistent manner.
Story Development - The novel's pacing is on the slower end but still remains enjoyable for the reader to follow the story of the main character as we learn and uncover the mysterious background he comes from. The novel steers away from some common troupes seen in other similar superhero novels and excels in telling a captivating story that has the reader anticipating for what is coming in the future.
Character Design - Good character design ranging from the main protagonist to side characters in the academy. Characters are memorable and fleshed out with their own problems to deal with. I am looking forward to how you will develop them more in later chapters.
World Background - The novel revolves around a society of people with superhuman abilities with a broad scope of abilities that are possible. Additional expansion of the existing world would be nice and introductions to organizations could be improved on.
Overall, a decently well-written novel that I am looking forward to continuing at a later date. I hope that this novel gets more attention that it deserves and maintains the quality of writing it currently has right now.
The author gives us a stupid idiot soldier and believes that readers will be idiots with IQ5 and will believe him that a SPECIALIST who can operate special equipment is an idiot. There is a character in the story dumb-as,nob,IQ5,naive,childish,aggressive,maniac .The author is an IQ5 idiot to believe that normal readers will believe the nonsense he describes. Rating minus 100 .
This is a more recent review of my own novel. It's not joke review, and I would like to dedicate this to people who are interested in reading this novel.
The start is a bit slow due to the worldbuilding, but worry not, things will kick in. You might think that there's a lack of action and romance at the start, but again, don't worry. Things will truly start to consistently progress after a certain torture scene.
Anyways, this story is actually hardcore sci-fi disguised as fantasy. So I hope you guys won't mind if the story switches genres in later parts.
Its good.................................................................................................................. ..................... updates pls
It's such a great novel; feel in love with it. Hopefully you push thru and not drop this hidden gem...................................................................................................................................................
I like the book, the author has a good point, and I must say, you would like it too if you give it a try.
So therefore, I highly recommend this book, and assure whosoever is reading this that he /she would like it too
I am happy a fan decided to drag this novel to Webnovel, it an interesting novel with visual reality gaming elements.
It shows great potential a lot of leading phrases that invoke curiosity and makes the reader want to come back a potential nail bitter and i like the world building
Really enjoying it right now
I can see the story has a lot of potential
Hope anyone checking it out gives it a chance
50 chapters. The hero gets dumber with each chapter (and don’t say that he is still young, etc. (he sometimes gives out strong ideas and actions and he is not a virgin, just stupid)), the very idea of cutting and pasting is not new, but sometimes reading - Interesting.
i personally wanted to rate this piece of ///// zero rating and please do not waste your time reading this. I hope you use your precious time elsewere
nice .....................................