Oi editor, I think in the ch.483 - Jiangning City, I don't think there were 140 million population in the city! Even the most populated city in the world just in about 30 million population. Please fix it. Bye!
When will it finish?
I’m on chapter 2 at the moment and so far it seems interesting but the translation when it mentions the MC step mother it would switch back and forth between him/her he/she and since this story revolves around Alphas, betas, and omegas where it doesn’t matter if they’re man or women, as long as they’re an omega then they can get pregnant so it doesn’t help with my confusion, so I’m confused is the step mother a women or a man? Cause one moment it would mention the stepmother a she then the next it would change to he. I don’t know if this is cause of the translator mistake or what but so far thats the only thing that’s bothering me.
chapter 70 plus? when did irene get together with the mc? i thought she is drowning in a cave somwhere?
Pancake-chan never dropped a novel, don't stop! I'm rooting for you!
Sigh... Just why? It had been so good for a long time. Why did the translation suddenly become worse than Mtl... The company suddenly becomes Big Mom... Even the mtl still used Qinglin not Linlin.
It's good man, Hope for more Chapters to comes in the future.
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Like many of you, I am also just a fan and an avid reader of light novels who have gone through a lot of imagination everytime I read through the chapters of a story.. so I am not actually a professional writer..
This novel is actually my first.. I don’t know, it’s just that one day I started to conceptualize my own idea of cultivation world.. and then inspiration suddenly kicked in to write it down in the midst of my own personal schedule.. and I say my work was way way far from perfect but it was fun doing it..
I then took all the courage I could muster just to upload the first few chapters I made about three months ago because I wanted to share what I started to write..
I do feel a bit sad that there are holes in the story that I failed to see which somehow disappointed some of the readers but I don’t feel discouraged at all.. in fact I feel that those things push me to improve this work..
So I’m kind of happy how many of the readers reacted to the story especially when some of you even discussed things in the comment section..
So thank you, hope you continue reading..
Qairi
Great story, with good powers for the MC. It also is very arousing, which fit it's purpose very well.
I really like it and until chapter 40, it seems good. Idk if the author xan keep it up and about the raw chapters reading them is hard.
The 'childishness' of the MC is kinda refreshing, since I've been reading extremely dark and twisted stories that just break your soul (search for dystopia tags). Again, if done right, it'll be good and since we're only at chapter 40, idk how it'll turn out but I hope it gets translated cuz mtling the raws makes me feel like my brain is frying/melting.
the system gets stronger, and he gets more abilities. The more he possesses people, so in 19 chapters, he possesd 1 person..... not even worth being bathroom reading material
*cough* attention yall.
THIS. NOVEL. IS. TRASH.
100% females side characters.
100% males as villians.
100% simp.
100% magnet for troubles.
10000000% disgusting.
Read to end if u can. Tsk.
Novel only for braindead reader. End.