bruhhh the elves here are not vegetarian
Great plot. Start will be very slow because the author is introducing all the plot elements and the wimpy character side is very annoying but trust me it gets better within some time. Give it a try and you won't be disappointed.
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I swear to god this is one is great. Reading it, with the over the top grammatical mistakes is making this so fun. I never read novels on web, but this one, I cant get my eyes off of it.
Highly Recommended.
If someone edit this please comment here so I will know xD... The story is good and very creative its just that the grammar is.... LOLOLOSLOLSOALSOALS
Can you believe that all this time I was never curious if I can edit old comments. I was on another site and I remembered this now. I've been working this week and meeting new people who have inspired me to work harder on my English. A good week everyone.
I really like the main character, Mayar, his charisma, kindness, and leadership skills really do help in making the things that the boys accomplish not seem too unrealistic. I've also noticed that your writing has greatly improved since the beginning. It seems you've gained some confidence and have a clear end goal for the novel. The only thing I would suggest is giving the other characters more screen time because right now everything seems to revolve around Mayar. It makes liking the other characters difficult. Other than that one complaint, I am greatly enjoying the novel and hope for many more chapters!
The narration in this book are good including the story and pace. I find some good use of words and i would really like to read the story further....
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I haven't read alot of novels 8n here but among the few I have this one tops at nine.
Found another hidden gem ! This novel deserve my spirit stones ! Oh i'm so happy with myself ^^
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