*sob sob sob* at last a new one! i thought that no one will write a new novel with so many research potential.
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the name is basketball myth: super guard . you can find it in mtlnovel, it has about 1488 chaps. good job on the editing man. but do give the source in the description before people starts to question you.
If the author of this novel was 12 years or younger: Great concept! You are an intelligent young author with good ideas. Please develop your writing and let us enjoi your works in the future.If the author is older... at least 16 or more.... ARG!!!Usually I like this kind of story - Beast-Taming, getting Stronger, a system for adds. However, in this story it is presented so plainly and... arg!-First of all, the language, even if machine-translated, is kindergarden-level.-Szene-Descriptions are awfull in their composition, especially the fights.- I am only at chapter 14 or so, but the plot is jumping and jumping ahead, with sequenses and szenes other novels would make 3-12 chapters for AT LEAST, which here are implemented, rushed down and... not usefull at all.- Power-jumping is the next thing. Just a few sentences ago something was explained to only work at higher level, MC does it earlier... with no explenation for HOW! It was just neccessary - NOT!- Dumb characters, which are so 2D, that I fear they could degrade to 1D with a little less care...- The resoning of the MC and the characters is another thing and... "Ah, he is doing somthing dangerours... but he is MC... he says he wants to do it... how could I forbid it, even thought I am responssible for his safety?" WHAT KIND OF LOGIC LEVEL IS THAT????ARg! I m frustrated, because the idea behind the story seemed good and interesting, but - I am not sure if that is TOO hard - the author makes nearly EVERY mistake an author can make in the development at the beginning AND seems not to care about his own naming of techniques, at all..Sorry, I am frustrated....
I have read till the most recent chapter and I am really liking it right now. The story is really interesting and the characters are very likable. If you are checking it out, let me just tell you, the story only gets better not worse.
Ah, yes. Sentou Maids, a man's romance. (I still don't get why I still get frustrated after chapter 38 tho, probs 'cuz the memories thing which only joined him midway, and me being uncomfortable about something in which I can't describe... the mc yet not the mc thing hurts my smol breyn. Aleshia such a great waifu, umu.)
Realy nice written book
Good Gramma
Nicely chosen words
And is just realy comfortable to read
100% recomended
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This novel is absolutely phenomenal!
Each character has such intricate details, and the author does a really good job portraying their individual personalities! (And the “Pokémon-catching” of MC’s lovers honestly isn’t as cringingly quick as most novels, and it is somewhat sensible.)
The backstory of the main character & his sister was pulled off really well, and the MC’s & Layla’s subsequent resulting personalities have legitimate justification.
1. Amazing writing quality! Hardly any grammatical errors.
2. Pretty good update stability! It’s pretty stable, I just wish there was more!
Currentl really likeing the story now and I would have to say that the story is progressing very well and I’ll be looking forward for more from this story.
I like the story so far great plot and not too cliche of a horror story beginning but it really helps and develops as our MC continues on and his squad
it starts out meh but later it's good. the mc is kind of an idiot when he is daydreaming but dealing with people he does well. interested to see where it goes.