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When you start censoring the original everything it stands for is lost.
So now i have dropped this and will rather find and read some MTL then read some censored crap
First time I’v been forced to drop a review on a novel. Summed up in 3 words. Pile of garbage. The character was all over the place. Levelling system can’t even be considered a system. No explanation on things. World development is awful. I held hope it would get better but nope it got worse and worse with 0 objective or aim. Goes on to say “oh I’ll keep a low profile by not doing this” and next second does the thing he just mentioned not to do. Absolute waste of time.
I'd grade the writing quality anywhere from B+ to A- approximately. No major grammatical errors, and the author's more than satisfactory command of English already places him miles ahead of at least half the other writers over here on WN. As for the story itself, reading this takes me back to the .hack franchise I used to love playing through (and watching) in my teens.
Lastly, with regard to points for improvement? There's really not much I have on that end, considering what's already been written is already very good. The one bit of general advice I'd say applies here is to go back to your material and proofread it at least once or twice a month for any grammatical errors you may have missed at an earlier point.
Well done overall.
Damn, another translated novel from WW just been stolen. Poor WW, your hardwork are just a thing they can actually just... snatch. I hope people whos managing here can just be honorable enough to do their own stuff and not just stealing other people's work.
The MC seems a scaredy cat that run away from everything, he doesnt try to become stronger at all and doesnt even listen to the advice his parents gave him. He use his own logic without thinking about facts and ehat other tell him, "If I think it's like that, it's like that". He has talent, but doesnt fight at all; putting talent on a person like that is wasted..
Just a Weeb...
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Hi MadReader, is it okay if I plug my novel in the comment's section of some of your chapters? There's no direct message option yet but I want to share my story to some of your readers, hoping you'll not find it offending. In exchange, I won't mind if you plug your novel in my comment's section too.
Whats with the book cover? Are we gonna see A Rory in this story?
Tasty tasty... I just started but I'm already half way through 50 chapters.
I'm not addicted, I swear...
Jokes aside its pretty good, and the mc is bad- I mean a pretty interesting character, I want to see how he develops.
Please continue this story... Your first 3 chapters already make me curse because its only had 3 chapters. Please continue your, i'll support you for this story... I like this kind of story after all.
I really really like this book to the point i started reading it and stayed awake the whole night without realising it.
Thank you for such a wonderful book.
Please keep on updating regularly till this book is officially completed.