the story has a promising start although the book can be improved more... and please author update more chapters frequently
This book is way too awesome to be alone.The interesting part starts from the start. A great story awaits you if you just read the first page.loved this book.The writing style is great and strong. liked the words and sentences construction.keep it up
All in all one of the best reads I have ever had the pleasure of spending time on.... However the only thing I have complaints about is the ending. It feels as though the author just gave up at the end and took the lazy way out of having to write anymore. but other than that an absolute blast of a read!
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Hello everyone! This is an updated review after the novel was out for 6 months by now!
I saw a lot of authors writing the pros and cons of their works, So I decided that it is the perfect time to do one for my novel since there is already 300+ chapter available!
Pros:
>Extensive and fleshed out world background that would let you immerse yourself in the world much smoothly and find the logic in it although it is a piece of fiction!
>MC isn't dense, stupid, virgin. He knows his priorities and doesn't chase skirts or risk his life over stupid shit.
He is lazy and doesn't like having burdens. However, he is hardworking when it is concerning his strength.
He is shameless, an asshole, and a bit of a troll. But, he is serious when he had to.
He isn't a white knight neither he plans to be one.
>English is not the best but it's not the worst either. I make sure to edit my chapters before releasing them and always check on previous mistakes.
>Updates: 2 Chapters every day with a word count ranging from 1600 to 2000.
>The First Volume was my 1st ever written volume so it wasn't really the best thing that I have written. But please bear with mistakes you see or the style of writing as from 2nd volume upward, the writing just keeps getting better and better.
>Give it until the 2nd volume when he enters the UVR and sees if you like it then or not. **: There are 88 chapters for free to start!
>No harem.
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Cons:
>As I mentioned the first volume was a bit draggy than it should be and the writing wasn't the best in it.
>Side Characters: I am trying my best to develop them one by one but I still prefer focusing more on the MC to keep the plot going at a faster pace. So, you can expect not much from them in those 300 chapters. (Drastic changes or something like that.)
>No Harem, don't know if it is a con or pro, but I will just put it in both sections.
>I have been told that my writing style is quite jarring by some readers, but I will leave you to decide that on your own.
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That should be it probably? If I missed anything, please write it in the comments, and please do know that I accept criticism with a thick face just make it logical and I will try my best to see what I can do about it.
Thank you and I hope you join the journey with me and the rest of my lovely readers <3<3<3
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Terrific novel. Needs a little push so that people can see it for the gem that it really is. Highly recommend giving it a shot for mystery/detective work genre lovers.
I can confidently say that I have a pretty good understanding of the book at this point as I have read all 500 current chapters and the author has continued to improve over time and doesn't progress the book too fast nor too slow. The story is great for those that want something a little different from what is common and if you want something with an intelligent but not cocky MC
After reading the synopsis I become curious about this story and hoping this novel get picked so I will just giving it four star until I can get more information abot this novel story
I have read up to chapter 25 so I can't say for the whole novel if it went better. The novel is completed with only 450 chapters. The novel just isn't that interesting enough for me to waste my time to read that much chapters. This is the main problem with this novel. It is tiresome to read which leads to to the audience tired to invest time in reading this novel. There is also the common problem with the dialogues. The medium of the novel is the writing. We can't see how they talk but can only imagine it with how the author writes. Having overreaction and unrealistic dialogues makes the characters in the novel dumber and makes you imagine that they have screw loose. It tried to be comedic but just failed. This won't gather enough readers to make it viable to translate especially with how much chapters it only have.
Ahh it's author from summon the holy sword I'm hopeful that the author will get rid of his habit of rambling overlong period of chapters can't stand that especially if it's useless info dumps and repetitive words and sentences.
it's pretty good
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