A New Beginning in a Mana Apocalypse
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  • Ashra
  • Status:Ongoing

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When rifts open to other dimensions mana pours into our world. The changes in the people are sudden and not necessarily good. Daryl Wallous had a good change, he gained abilities that he feels can make him someone more important. Plenty of others make the change too, and not just people.
Will he and his friends be ready when they realize that the problem can't be contained, or that mana wasn't the only thing to come through the rifts?
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I currently am aiming to release five chapters a week, but I do not have a set schedule for the days they will be released. I will try to release Monday through Friday but I reserve the right to change release days.

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To start off I don't dislike your story, on the contrary, i think it's pretty good. I applaud you for your good grammar and sentence structure. Now my biggest disappointment with this story has to be the characters in the way that they affect the story. To start off none of the characters act like they're in an apocalyptic situation. all of them seem to be very unbothered by the peril they are in, they act like the apocalypse is just another Tuesday. And with the addition of annoying characters like courtney and that other thot, the story becomes less about the apocalypse and more of a highschool drama.
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The MC seems a scaredy cat that run away from everything, he doesnt try to become stronger at all and doesnt even listen to the advice his parents gave him. He use his own logic without thinking about facts and ehat other tell him, "If I think it's like that, it's like that". He has talent, but doesnt fight at all; putting talent on a person like that is wasted..
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I think you have a good start, I like the main character. I’m really looking forward to seeing what happens to him. I’m also looking forward to the story picking up and to see how how many wives he ends up with.
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As the author it is a given that I will give myself a good review.
This may be my first work but I have some great ideas for this story, though it might take some time for me to get there.
I hope you will enjoy my own version of an apocalypse story as much as I will writing it.
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Great history just a bit to much into the *** part but still great its a must read one of my favorites right now keep up the good work im waiting alot from this
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