Is the cover art person 5? Lmao
where did that come from
bruh did you read it atleast
Wow, this noob of a MC is so self- righteous and such a ... fricking noob.
the story is seemingly written to pander 6 year olds.
fuck man im crying as well T_T
Well played.
If it's Xianxia then it deserves a complete five star from me
I really enjoyed the story, I want to see how the character will overcome the difficulties and help his family. I hope he has true friends.
I find it really cool to be loving and to think about your family first.
Well the idea is nice and the start of the story was great but then it just started reading like a lab report.. even some chapters later on when the MC was “planning” out his training plans read like an abstract of a thesis. That was annoying but it’s not the reason I dropped the novel, what really ticked me off is how everyone (and I mean everyone from the orphans to the leaders of the nation) somehow always talk with great logic and points of validity.
I wouldn’t be surprised if the author chose the scientific track when they were in high school but bro, that’s not how you write a novel.
6th chapter needs reworking, that’s the moth of immersion breaking. The whole thing about muscle memory and that he still can’t adapt to his body just doesn’t make sense
I renounce everything that contradicts with islamic law
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Status: 544 ( Completed)
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