For now (20 chapter ) it is interesting... story is well written.
I hope he doesn't copy or do same thing as his previous Novel.
for I will rate this Average
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I liked it a lot, I hope more chapters n.n [img = recomendar]
so this review is only for upto chapter 6 it's a little slow paced for my liking it's probably just me and the protagonists seems plain but that's just my opinion and there maybe development in the later chapters
Let me be honest the Grammer is unbearable the simplest of mistakes are made and ruins the flow of the novel the author seems to not care much to remember what he just wrote down then says or does something the same a few paragraphs later the MC is really dumb for a dude that was the best scientist author could be bothered to re read his work let alone remeber if he wrote down “looks at hands and they seem bigger” then MC goes and looks in water to see hes red like what
very good story even if I find that everything went a little too fast but it's ok, sukuna has also his personnality slighty changed but it's not just some random change, you should also develop a little more the dialogues and the background , otherwise until then I love it, hope you don't dropped
Author here. Dual cultivation? Big harem? Gentle but cruel? System? Illicit relationships? This novel contains everything, please take a peek. I hope you all enjoy it.
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Starting Off the grammar Is quite poor with random missing words and sentences that make zero sense to native English speakers. The world background is quite poor with the MC essentially having been attempted murdered but seems nothing happened to that person And MC doesn’t sue or anything. There is no real reason given in the game why the AI decided to skip steps beyond O well. Then when set in the fighting zone MC goes from running and struggling with a single mob to somehow being able to nuke 13 after a single level gain with the fight magically just being complete. The plot armor here would make a nuclear superpower scared to attack. It makes no sense and this ruins the story.
Interesting synopsis buuut.. then I see this "however what they didn't expect was that zombies had unimaginable VITALITY!!"filler filler f
8 released chapters start off pretty slow, later on it gets infinitely better as pacing picks up. Personally it's my favorite book and I think it will change the trend of cultivation books forever