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Honestly cant say it how good this story is although its slow spaced for some i think it’s prefectly set as the author puts a lot of effort into each chapter they give details Into the characters and world they are in and give deep to each of the characters giving them emotions and feeling that you dont see many other authors give
Interesting. So far I have only read a few chapters but what should I say? I am hooked. The characters are good. The setting is also cool. Great work, highly recommended
This book is amazing, keep going!Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
the grammar in this story is just too awful. I understand that a ruff draft will have mistakes, but this is just unreadable. Writer has an interesting story idea, but giant plot holes in the world building and overall needs more work and polishing.
You get an MC that you don't like and he rejects system and women. The premise is decent, MC is very very very very very boring and side characters annoying and so far 1 / 4 women is decent. If the MC or side characters were interesting enough I would continue, but I fail to find a decent enemy to root for. I see no character I like apart for the secretary, which is ok. I want someone to write a villain fan fic for this where the secretary gets saved and the rest of the cast disappears. PS also the kid and her mom should be saved from a life of boredom.Character design should not be negative because of secretary and the kid and her mom.As some have said the story might get better later but I cant get past reading 70 chapters of this.
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Very hard to read, nice story but the grammar? I hope the guy gets some help editing this. Good luck.------------------------------------------------------------------------
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