~It is good, just one simple problem author, we need pic of characters for visualisation of story and stuff 'cough' segs 'cough' ..........,~?
this is one of my favorite novel right now.if you, like me , are too used to villain protagonist or dark fantasy like botds , this one is the light you're looking for. good world background, good character development and good story?WHAT MORE COULD I ASK?
beast taming version of I'm actually a cultivation bigshot. There is a lot of similarities between the two. If this novel was after the prior, I can say that it took HEAVY inspiration, of not copied from the other. overall if you liked cultivation bigshot, more than likely you will like this, so long as you don't keep comparing.
ive read his or her second story i ll say its quite actully good and has potential..a unique genre not like other repetitive story background . in other discords.. ill support you bro 11 KEEP IT UP... ITS SOURCE IS RELIEBLE THE CHAPTER 3 IS INTERESTING......it has horror adventure fells ...
Yeah, not gonna lie. The cover got me. Still, with a summary that reads "basically overgeared, but with a combat class," i can't say i'm not interested.
Dear authour the story was really good. Though u could have added some more chapers. Hope you would give us some more exiting novels like this hope to read soon love u authour.
Love the writing style; the combat scenes are very intense, and the idea of showing emotions with their eyes is very creative. Looking forward to the next chapter!
Exp exp exp exp Exp exp exp exp Exp exp exp exp Exp exp exp exp Exp exp exp exp Exp exp exp exp Exp exp exp exp Exp exp exp exp Exp exp exp exp
It takes some "inspiration" from WoW. Kind of interesting premise, sort of shows what it would be like if some of the NPCs where actually players. Biggest turn off is the Pay-To-Win elements, because realisticly no one would play this game, he's like under lvl 10 and it requires 20 dollars to revive his character.
The mc is not one of the bois, nuff said.In anycase, I find how independable the mc is annoying. I have a feeling the story will have a repetitive cycle of the mc being too confident, face slapping, then there is a hiccup where he is having a big disaster, and then magically it tides over.I mean the fact is, he has not once concluded any sort of testing towarda his abilities. He just sort of hope it works. We havent seen him activily train his abilities either, especially since ita been said that the extent to which he has his abilities arent to the level of the original patient.He is dumb, arrogant, and extremely lucky. Also he seema to be far more physically able than it makea sense. Like sneaking that piece of paper, how? I dont remember a patient that could do that, he most certainly doesn't have that type of skill. How bad of a secret agent are u if a total noob can do that? Horrible character design..Ans the whole seducing the woman to get her on their side, seems like such a dumb way to get ppl to so things. U really think someone like her would abandon their ambition and work for some punk who only wants sex? Thats horrible world development and character development. TfI can also see him being blinded by lust. He is a hopeleas pervert. Like how vain do u have to be to seek satisfaction in the number of women u conquer. And obiously his superiority complex, that comes from wanting to steal other ppl's women. I can see his stealing a mans girl, and causing aome type of chaos for no reason. All bc he needs the satisfaction of being better than other men. Thats pretty vain and I dislike it. Its like that other book with the 10 keys, i can easilt see thia book degrade bc of the pervert quality.Ik alot of my review is full of opinion. But thats what a review is, my opinion on a novel, and i think its not great. Honeslty i think the novel is just baiting all the h.orny ppl into it.
???exp?????????exp????????exp??????exp?????????exp????????exp??????exp?????????exp????????exp??????exp?????????exp????????exp??????exp?????????exp????????exp??????exp?????????exp????????exp??????exp?????????exp????????exp??????exp?????????exp????????exp??????exp?????????exp????????exp???
generic brainless crap written by 14yo.Do not waste ur time on this shit.So badddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddd.