Wow! your book is amazing! Adventures is my favorite genre. I hope got to learn more about magics. Kinda excited to read more of this chapter. Keep it up the good work author!
My main issue here is the protagonist: namely, throughout the entire nineteen chapters, he's a baby, so he doesn't really do anything. He's literally just caried around by angels and/or the system 24/7 without any of his own input going into this. You could replace the MC with an actual baby and the plot would be unchanged.
Her behavior made Mei feels puzzled and suspicious. Mei's hand started pulling Michael's shirt but Michael does not cared about her as he still talking with Henry even though Mei has given him a silent moment.
