Melon_daomaster_9
to put it simply this book is the perfect example of a very good concept completly destroyed by dreadful grammer and even horrible story progression..i understand the MC having an edge over everyone else becase of the scince from his old world helping him comprehend stuff better but all he seems to do is recitate facts like a bloody walking wikipedia and boom..he goes from mortal to demigod in THREE!.days.and even with all this knowledge he eventually used all his "prodigious insight" from his world to become the god of CHESS ..i stopped reading at that point....
Woow man!! You really good. Big ups. such great creativity and the way you merge everything is pretty awesome. The book is really good and am addicted to every chapter in the book. Hope you complete whatever you doing and update it more and more. Cause man!! The book is awesome
Revised review of the author:-- Some grammatical mistakes here and there in the initial chapters; however, as long as you don't mind those mistake, I will guarantee regarding the story.- It's going to be a long book. So, be prepared for it.- No harem- Many elemental spirits and spirit beasts- New worlds- Overpowered mc with hidden powerful enemies.Hmm...that's it. I hope you enjoy reading it. If you have any more doubts, you can ask me below this reply.Thanks for reading my books.
I see there this is going, a D&D fantasy world where everyone calls the protagonist by his Chinese name, a dumb system awakening and mc who gets laid in the first chapter on a woman we barely know anything about. Great character design and plot development, I am focking dropping this. Also thank you very much WebNovel for dropping Warlock Apprentice this week and picking up this peace of idiotic wishfulfilment crap.
The story was good I like how u made the mc be hate by a lot of people have the the phone you can get in your life and that not to get you back you can get a call back and let go of your phone or call you bae I know I don’t have the answer when I’m going back to call me and call you bae I want something good I don’t
