sounds interesting. would be a 4.2 but character design got reduced to 1 star because a female lead inside male lead pilot read.
I'm so happy someone picked up this novel I'm even more happy I found it
As someone pointed out, most of the chapters are fillers. He wanted to kill the arrogant young master, but the author decided to waster around 12 chapters and still MC hasn't killed it. It will probably take another 10 or more chapters to do it
this story isn't good.
YOU SHOULDN'T READ THIS NOVEL.
first problem:the translation quality.
the translation quality is exceptionally bad. I honestly didn't read something translated like this since almost 10years
(grammar errors, repetitive sentences, unclear paragraphs and more)
second: the story is not original.
you might be thinking at the start of the story "wow so original, he was forgotten by god" or other stuff however this idea has existed long before in other critically acclaimed novels. Specifically "everyone else is a returnee". If I were to be honest about my feeling I would say that this is a mediocre copy of the previously mentioned novel with both poor translation and poor imagination form the author.
third: the saving grace?
As mentioned in the title of this section, I still think that there's a saving grace in this novel. what is it, you might ask. well here it is : the unfinished state of the "game"
this, for me at least, was a saving grace because even if the mc defeated a powerful enemy or solved a difficult puzzle he could get absolutely nothing.
furthermore the interaction between the mc fighting in a world very real and the unfinished state of other stuff was most of the time enjoyable.
CONCLUSION:
Should you read this story?
No.
Is this story absolutely trash?
No, even tho it's bad, unoriginal, badly translated, it can still be enjoyable.
I read this story and really enjoyed it who do you think you are to say something like that?
Exactly I am nobody except for myself. Certainly not you, this review is ultimately only my point of view on this story. I would still recommend to check out "everyone else is a returnee" if you liked this novel.
i usually wait till a series is in full swing before reading as it takes more than a few chapters to cause me to continue reading. this was not the case as I was fully engrossed in the story by the end of chapter 2. would wholeheartedly recommend reading
A mixed of VRMMO Series with Monster who levels up.. but with a little troupe.. Great for now and it has a very intresting.. Hope it gets picked
Great story..felt as if I know the character..his feelings as if it were of someone I know close enough.. waiting for more..hope soon enough I get read and enjoy more...
First of all, I really love science fictions/movies. I love how the author is building the world background. I am hands down to the writing style and plot. READ this novel, its more than worth it. ♥️
this a nice story, i was looking forward on reading it further,
Thank you for the story.
good day!.
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Brain dead mc. Simp. low iq. Equivalent of a twelve year old with mental issues. Hypocritical to a fault. Contradicts himself. the list goes on. Overall he's a trashy character. He was bullied so what do you expect, all these so called bully victims who don't help themselves or at least try to are worse than their bullies and the people who watch and do nothing. What should one expect from someone with the strength of character to not help himself and wants everything on a diamond plate. He's trash, story is trash, everything is trash. It has some good points but ....the mc ruins it all.
Hi. Ur sci-fi story is interesting and it's descriptive which makes me read the next, next chapter. I nearly going to finish till 12chapters and I hope you will update soon : )