So far from what I have read up to chapter 49, this story is above average. The mc is not perfect nor allowed his past problems to allow him to be evil. He is a flawed character, to which in life is more realistic than most stories i have read on here. I think being able to relate to a mc actions in a story is very impressive compared to most of the stories which are slanted in one way or the other to a very bad degree.
The only small problem I have seen thus far is the author has a small problem with the "him" "her" flip flop sometimes. the author seems to have fixed most of it as of chapter 49.
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Shameless author review here.This is first time writing a sports novel so don't expect this to be a super novel although I am a super football fan so I am sure of what I am doing.My grammar isn't great but I'm pretty sure it's readable and I try my best to minimise errors.Drop any questions you need answers to?
This book is really totally amazing and totally worth reading ?..Great job to the wonderful author ?
Review (325 chapters)An absolute hidden gem that leaves the readee wanting more and more. Binged in two days and currently at a loss for what to do now since i ran out of chapters. Not going to do an in depth review today but i can strongly give this a top 10. will answer questions any potential reader has for a couple of days.Consistent Male/Female Mc Growth both physically and PsychologicallyNo harem/no real relationship as of yet but it is budding, good romance without being real romance. relationship quality is 10/10 with nothing forcedDefinitely no cliché’s and feels extremely freshI dont usually care for dual pov but amazingly done hereMC’s arent OP but stronger than their peers due to their circumstances, no powerlevel jumps in fights like alot of novels where mc magically defeats someone 10x stronger and older than him bc the young mc somehow has more experienceWorld background is well done and plenty of room for explorationWriting quality is great but sometimes mixes up who is talking between the mc’s but rare and easily noticable so nothing majorSystem/reincarnation is top notch hereCharacter Emotions are also top notch and i can still explicitly remember the womens emotions ans physical reactions during the bandit extermination 10/10Good mysteries going on that leave alot of questions and answers to be discovered•Has potention to be one of the best novels on this site and many others when completed. I previously stated top 10 easily but thats just because i cant make up my mind if it takes top 5 right now due to alot of the story left untold as of right now.Note to Author- Amazing work, I am in love with your story and hope you can keep the pace and fully finish it without breaking away to other projects because i believe THIS will be not only your masterpiece, but a true masterpiece on this site with limitless potential. -Syph
Overall a good novel, but the MC...probably pussy type which is okay???? So no HAREM which is fking good because that genre is pure cancer and the people that like it too most likely a fat dude, no life retard. That's all. Im giving it a 4
If you have a passion and look for a book about dnd than i ask you to leave because as long as you are somewhat familiar with dnd and played some this book will make you cringe hard. 40 chapters in and i can say that translators knowledge about dnd is nonexistent, while authors could only be described as superficial at best.
The book is set in modern Earth where MC often travels to different "virtual" dungeons to kill monsters and gain loot. The story is filled with videogame references and humour but is not excessive. The MC has normal view on life and stable personality.
While overall it's not a top tier book it has it's own charm and good points so I recommend it to read for people interested in world-hopping genre.
Its good so far but im still waiting for some g re ammical errors to be fixed
Im honestly surprised this got on trial reads, the writing styles bland and the story is full and full of cliches with under average plots and slow developments, not surprised this wasnt chosen
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