CHRONICLES OF THE REAWAKENED

This story was great the plot and it's characters. And for me, I really like it so I recommend it to others to read. I'm not being bias, it just get to my heart. I wish you will give us some wonderful work. Thank you!!! I love it. Fantastic and magnificent, your story is the best. Even though that I like more on action story with the touch of fantasy, I really like your story. But to think that I will fell in love in this story was unbelievable also I really like it thank so much.

There is always an issue with giving your character way too many powers especially if it's someone OP like Saitama, also, why the heck would you stick to the plot and why the double heck is there another reincarnated person in your story? that's a taboo when it comes to reincarnation novels, if never bodes well for the story.

it's finally here!!! muahahahahaha*runs around the room* ........... .............................................hahahahahahahaok I'm calm now

just as a fellow author i am i give this novel 4 because of the new world and the creation the author did.but ?the story is not so good i will say that as i also a writer i will say you should do something new story. like a normal family not the revenge  type story. many readers readed the revenge type story  thats the fan fiction  is so popular this day.creat some new story. man not like this here every one can guess what your story main thing. like this title the book as a world overload.right most of readers will think about a Finally a different story. butyou just killed by writing your story a revenge with tragic story. where mc try to claim the power of the top to take revenge. and in this process  you make mc life harder and giving him a ton of luck etc to survived the dead like scenario. this type of novel is all over the net. so do sometimes new. like the age of adapts if you read the novel. you will find that start is different from most of the other novel. except the reincarnation details that the author copyed it from the other novels. the rest are different and so does the Storyline  is Also. the mc of this story  almost died if not for his quick Brain.yes there is luck on mc but the author of age of adapts didnt put much except on 5 occasion of the entire novel. this all i have to say man. your novel had great potential  if not for your revenge with tragic background and the mc lot of lucks.....

The door opened with no resistance and in the center of the room they found Rey who was restrained in the interrogation chair. Finn immediately approached and checked on her, finding that she was unconcious with marks in many parts of her body which showed the torture she had suffered for information. This sight made him feel his heart bleeding in pain. He immediately released the tie ups and received her in his arms. After a while Rey woke up and panicked.

After that, I replaced the sheet which became mushy with various liquid, re-arranged the bed using a super strong dryer (Miyako's invention. The frequency of use is high because of the incontinence during sex), then called out to Miyako who was waiting in the living room